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Comments of chapter undefined of Forging my Legend in One Piece

CanibalCandy
CanibalCandyLv4CanibalCandy

I thought that the protagonist would obtain the yami and with its fruit another heart would be made😒

Black_Paladyn
Black_PaladynAuthorBlack_Paladyn

don't worry things may change

WeebNeet
WeebNeetLv4WeebNeet

Shouldn't Soren have expected this and made a few plans? Or does he want to let the plot flow

DerangedPirate
DerangedPirateLv5DerangedPirate

There are quite a number of people who could harm soren at this point in the story. Outside of the obvious one's; the current Yonko's, Dragon, the admirals and such, he should have been very wary of Blackbeard. This being because of the dark-dark fruit obviously. The dark-dark fruit's ability to nullify devil fruit abilities not only strips him of a considerable amount of his power but also cripples his healing factor. The only reason he is alive at this point. Yet somehow right in front of his eyes when he knew what was about to happen, blackbeard got away with the dark-dark fruit. By blinding Ace, Marco and Soren with a flash bomb. If Ace and Marco would be blinded by flashes of light they would be unable to use their devil fruits effectively in the first place. Have you seen their attacks? I vividly remember Ace's Dai Enkai/Flame emperor attack and would argue the brightness of that attack and that of many other attacks from the both of them to be very bright aswell. Brightness was never an issue yet here both the ''flame man'' and the ''fire phoenix-man'' get blinded by a flash bomb. Also why would Soren aim for blackbeards legs when he could have attacked his torso? A human torso, even more so the size of Blackbeards would have been much easier to hit. That Would have killed him and thus prevented blackbeards escape with the fruit and the creation of a very dangerous foe. A foe with the ability to use two devil fruits. If this whole scene is created with the idea of making Blackbeard a major antagonist it is incredibly lame since soren damn well knew what was going to happen when Thatch pulled out that particular fruit. This entire scenario feels very forced to me.

Piggy
PiggyLv15Piggy

the thing that annoys me the most about one piece fanfics is that rarely does a person actually kill Blackbeard. idk but its kinda like their scared of changing cannon and in a way lazy to think of a different future

Jonathanjtj
JonathanjtjLv4Jonathanjtj

Sorry to say that but this scene was VERY forced. How Teach arrived so fast behind Tatch and managed to kill him being that he (Tatch) was in front of Soren, and Soren was keeping an eye on Teach at the time. It was impossible for Teach to have killed Tatch like that. And the worst was Soren aiming at the leg and not the head. Sorry but it was difficult to accept this scene. Google translator

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

EroDaGe
EroDaGeLv5EroDaGe

yep very forced situation, **** you author just drop this fic already u trash

CanibalCandy
CanibalCandyLv4CanibalCandy

I thought one of the reasons for joining shirohige was to get the Yami no mi 😡🤮🤮

Onxio
OnxioLv5Onxio

So really blackbeard just has a pegleg now

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

dark_zephyros
dark_zephyrosLv1dark_zephyros

Idiotic story.

asdasdssf
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Idk, how in the hell would Blackbead actually escape?? Even with flashbang it only gives an slight headstart. You have marco and Ace who most definitely could easily catch up. That's ignoring rest of the crew. There's just too many people -.- Mc even conveniently took his eyes off Teach...

ComTolManBoePyaJhu
ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

3 ?!?!? marshal d teach gol d ace and ?!?!

zhokeyou
zhokeyouLv5zhokeyou

Thanks for the chapter

_KioshiMichio_
_KioshiMichio_Lv2_KioshiMichio_

zehahahhaha

Nebi
NebiLv6Nebi

so the bastard still get the fruit zehahahhaha

Cengep
CengepLv10Cengep

nice

STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL
STPRCOMMENDINGGIRLLv13STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL

This Cp Kinda Triggered Me for some reason..!!

gothictogo
gothictogoLv15gothictogo

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story i can't even describe it please keep it up as long as you have fun and motivation take care and stay healthy

DaoistCQt8u3
DaoistCQt8u3Lv10DaoistCQt8u3

Thanks for the chapter. I'm happy thatch is alive now the story changes this very cool so change for the better.