Overall I have good feelings about this fanfic. But its pace... it's an explosive horror. Amazing descriptions and great vocabulary. Long chaps, which is usually good but not in this case. The descriptions are sometimes too thorough and filled with pointless depictions of unimportant details and unimportant characters. That's why the chaps are so long and the story tempo is too slow. Some may like it, some may not. I'm from the second. If the author had shortened some moments and sped up what was happening, boredom wouldn't have killed me. Bye.

And a tempo is too slow

I can’t count how many times I burst out laughing.

Classic.

That's nonsense. A son of a Ruler of the territory which is not under the control of the World Government wants to become a marine? God... that's so stupid.

I liked first chapters and have decided to read it all... until these strange and awkward dialogues began. And I won't say bout' MC's stupidity, it doesn't surprise me anymore.

Где я могу найти оригинал?

* I can accept it if the author will end this ff.

I like it. Of course, this story isn't without its flaws. For example, a very slow tempo and a chapter release that doesn't correspond to such a tempo. But I don't want to put up with it if the author will end his story.

It's too slow. How old is your MC? 10-11? And 40 chaps have gone...

Temp is too slow...

The author is just a jerk. Also if he'll write a continuation, MC will not bring everything to the end.

Trying to weave JJK into the HP is cool. But trying to completely merge them is a no-no. Why? This completely loses its meaning. After all, the essence remains the same. The characters are HP, and the events will stupidly repeat themselves along the trajectory of JJK. Even an attempt to weave the character of JJK into the character of HP is absurd. All originality has evaporated. I can already tell which characters have HP names but are JJK characters. In short, I didn't like it. This is a common combination.

Ehm.... Neville as a Todzi Zenin.

Once again I see these stupid, annoying and not funny jokes in FF. God, bless me with patience.

Obviously this is Cheshire.

Just for NTR. Why? Cause I hate it with all fibres of my soul. May God's providence cleanse this dirty author and his account. Oh Allah! Oh God! Oh, Moses (Musa), oh Jesus Christ (Jesus). Every Abrahamic prophet! Light up this wicked account and give it the flame of purification! Even Buddha (although I don’t believe in you), let this demon know the full power of Sanskrit and Your Heavenly Hand.

I think this novel got lost among many others because the author came up with a cool idea, but executed it lousy. And stretched it too thin.

Bro, translate it again to russian, and release on Rulate. You can gain some rubs.

Bro... all pleasure bout new update had gone. That's mistake, all of us doing mistakes, but my mood had broken.