Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
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I think he needs a new water spell. He doesn't have many and I feel it's a useful and versatile element. Definitely needs an amazing gift for Klea,; probably an artifact of some kind (especially if he can't get hers back...). Should probably get his own artifact. Maybe something to help boost water spells or his non dark elemnts as a whole
I feel like Emery should get another higher tiered spell that shouldn't be Plant or Darkness. But a spell he needs in his bag of tricks is another powerful attack type of spell. I feel it should be water as Emery doesnt use any of his water spells in battle. Water should be very flexible in battle so it should reflect that for Emery. A thought for a spell would be a spell that can create animals out of water. For Emery it would be naturally a wolf. He could later add darkness to the spell to make the wolf be able teleport like Emery. The natural abilities of the spell would that Emery can see through the eyes of the animal if he wants and later could transport his mind into the wolf. The wolf would have higher prowess based on how strong the caster is. The spell would make Emery way more flexible in battle as he can use the spell to take a powerful incoming spell. Or he could use the spell to help him out in three on one situations. Or even to scout out hostile territory. The limitations I thought of are simple. Once he first uses it he has to maintain focus and keep pumping spirit force into the spell to keep it active. But later on he doesnt need to focus at all it moves and reacts to his thoughts. Downside is that he wont be able to cast another spell. But the downside wouldnt matter much because he is able to turn into his shaman form or his day form to make up for that loss. Another downside is that the spell reacts to emotions and takes alot of spirit force to cast. For the emotions if Emery gets angry it might ruthlessly attack the enemy. It would also benefit his training of balance between his spirit core and darkness core. The buffs the spell would recive when he transforms is that it stays active longer, it has more defense, and it becomes more lifelike. Meaning it acts more like an animal the more powerful the caster is and acts on its own to protect Emery. I hope this is a well thought out spell that I came up with. I feel this whould help Emry be more balanced as a Magus. Obviously the spell might be a little bit to strong so it can be tuned down to not be able to take many hits or might not be that strong in the beginning until darkness merges with it.
