This is an easily 5 star book. I know what you might be thinking "A five-star book with a romance tag?" Yes. I used to read this book on my PC account but lost access, and I was so disappointed that I had to create a new email to write a review. I have never seen a book on this website that has not only successfully written a deep world with interesting characters. But also write a gritty novel with dark undertones of pure survival and determination of the human race. But this madman of an author (Endearing) wrote a non cringe Shakespearian romance in the middle of it. The author not only has done that but also keeps a certain personality and theme with the book that holds onto you whenever read it. I don't say this lightly to whoever has read this book or is thinking about picking up this book. In my opinion, this story deserves some type of anime adaption or comic adaption. Now I'll warn you that if you haven't read it and don't come in with an open mind you might not find this as enjoyable as I. The author is a very big Darksouls fan (So am I) and this got me with enthralled with each update. If you think I'm being too generous with this review please just read the first 30 chapters before dropping I beg. Also if the author somehow reads this. Just know I'm very critical with reviews and very rarely write them. So you earned my massive amounts of respect. Keep up the good chapter writing!

Gary has a problem now. Four people now know he is the leader. My guess is he is going to kill the director and scare the producer into submission. The girls are either going to keep his secret and not get involved in the gang or decide to get involved for Gary's protection.

Actually. nevermind your right that's more reasonable. 😅

I have been putting off a review for a while now, but after reading 1.5k plus chapters, I can give an honest opinion. I really love this book and especially the characters. In the beginning it's all understandable how the characters act and have good reasoning behind their actions. Obviously I expected the fan service. The characters and world building is one of the best on this place. Not because it's a unique twist to it. But there is actual character development that is reasonable. There isn't to much loopholes and the arcs are throughly planned out. *Spoiler* The only thing that I find wrong with this is after the Dalki war arc. I feel that there is way to much going on and not enough time. I feel that the author could have gotten away of ending the book. If it was because of not having enough chapters to end it I feel he could have extended the war part. Then he could have written another book being called something like "My Celestial Syestem" or something like that. It becomes to hectic and the pacing is way out of order. I find myself not being able to remember any of the new characters sometimes when their name is brought up. Like how powerful they are, their problems, their background, and what they goals are. I also feel that since he wanted to end the book he decided to kill off characters that are side characters. And wrote it down to something mysterious happening while he was away. Dont get me wrong the celestial part are still very good. But the problem is that since it's the same book I feel we got spoiled by how good the pacing was and the character building. I also belive that a second book could have had more weight to Quin becoming a celestial and him missing out on things. That way the author could have taken his time and rebuilt his world again about a world without Quin and him finding his way again. It would have been a finality as MVS would have ended with him being just a vampire and the new book would have began with him being a celestial. But it's hindsight now. I still feel like the book is still good as the old characters carry the arcs as the author made them so well. If the book ends really strong then I can easily put this in the top 10 on WN.

I agree with you. I think it's just the pacing of MVS. He needs to cramp in as much as he can so he can't fully flesh out the characters and storyline. Well, like he did with the book in the beginning, that is.

dhampir? 🤔

I think it's was an advanced teir with a special ability. that is the reason why it was tougher. In MVS, it was said that certain beasts in certain tiers had abilities that covered their weaknesses. It was the reason why so many beast hunters died. So, in reality, it was an advanced tier beast with that crystal, but a person would have to beat a tier above that beast in order to do relatively easily against it. That is why I think the scientist are confused on how to classify beasts when they are still alive. They can't discover the beasts hidden ability without fighting and killing it first.

The only way this makes sense is if Kai's older brother was like 26-28 and Kai was like 10. Because he is old enough to understand things and realize his father treats him like chores. Also the age gap is enough so that Marie is simular in age to Kai to be at the school. So that would make Kai the uncle to Marie.

I think it's wants to choose a leader. My theory is because it was the only one that actually took being a king seriously. Not to mention it picked Oscar. But I could be wrong here.

Should have gone for the head. Didn't Emery know that he is inevitable?

I'm pretty sure he is more resistant to cold. I think this place is incredibly cold as cold as the polar ice cap in order to make a vampire to feel cold. if that makes sense.

imagine the big boss at the end of the book was Chaos or Chronus. That would be pretty sick. It is explained that these celestials inspired the myths in our history of our race.

But it should work in a similar way. He controlled the blood aura to explode someone's arm. So he should be able to control his aura, hence his blood as it is explained they go hand and hand. Well for Vampires that is. Humans don't have blood aura. Plus he literally controlled blood from humans, vampires, and sub-classes to make billions of raindrops to kill Graham. So how much harder would it be to control enough blood to puppet someone?

No mot exactly. Their power is to literally copy their ability and make it stronger. That's because they have more MC cells then the original user. John's power from Unordinary is Aura Manipulation. He is able to copy their Auras and manipulate them. It leaves room for his powers to have a ton of potential to grow over time. Like his powers could be used to copy even the aura of the vampire's instead of copying their cells, which is impossible for Blades. But if John's powers had the same limits as the Blade's in this book then it's very powerful

if you remember Shadow lock isnt completely instant. It takes a little bit of time for them to sink into the shadows. So as the shadows where moving to put her into the Shadow lock he teleported her.

it's going to be amazing when Quinn shows off his powers especially the shadow powers. Shiro is going to be like "Quinn?" Quinn is going to him with the "You have sure grown up" line. The next couple of chapters are gonna be amazing I'm calling it right now.

Yea it just came to me because I remembered he controlled all that blood to kill the Dalki leader (forgot his name, I'm bad with names) and I was thinking that was an awesome fight. Then I remembered Avatar the Last Airbender with the blood bending. I thought that since he is practically the god of blood he should in someway be able to bend people's blood. It can easily be written in a way to not make it over powered. Like it takes alot of focus and some stress on Quinn. Or it can use celestial points the amount of people's blood he bends. It will also make him seem more badass and feel as powerful as a god. Since that whluld be something only the god of blood can do.

if Quinn does fight the chained there should be almost no contest with any of the chained. Quinn is literally a god so I think he should show the powers. Another thing I have been thinking of. If Quinn has absolute control over blood cant he control people's bodies like in Avatar the Last Airbender. Blood bending and all that? Yea maybe influence may not work anymore but it seems to be a solid work around. As long as Quinn keeps his focus he should be able to control their blood. if not turn them into puppets he could kill people by causing a brain hemorrhage in their brain. It's just an idea.

I feel like Emery should get another higher tiered spell that shouldn't be Plant or Darkness. But a spell he needs in his bag of tricks is another powerful attack type of spell. I feel it should be water as Emery doesnt use any of his water spells in battle. Water should be very flexible in battle so it should reflect that for Emery. A thought for a spell would be a spell that can create animals out of water. For Emery it would be naturally a wolf. He could later add darkness to the spell to make the wolf be able teleport like Emery. The natural abilities of the spell would that Emery can see through the eyes of the animal if he wants and later could transport his mind into the wolf. The wolf would have higher prowess based on how strong the caster is. The spell would make Emery way more flexible in battle as he can use the spell to take a powerful incoming spell. Or he could use the spell to help him out in three on one situations. Or even to scout out hostile territory. The limitations I thought of are simple. Once he first uses it he has to maintain focus and keep pumping spirit force into the spell to keep it active. But later on he doesnt need to focus at all it moves and reacts to his thoughts. Downside is that he wont be able to cast another spell. But the downside wouldnt matter much because he is able to turn into his shaman form or his day form to make up for that loss. Another downside is that the spell reacts to emotions and takes alot of spirit force to cast. For the emotions if Emery gets angry it might ruthlessly attack the enemy. It would also benefit his training of balance between his spirit core and darkness core. The buffs the spell would recive when he transforms is that it stays active longer, it has more defense, and it becomes more lifelike. Meaning it acts more like an animal the more powerful the caster is and acts on its own to protect Emery. I hope this is a well thought out spell that I came up with. I feel this whould help Emry be more balanced as a Magus. Obviously the spell might be a little bit to strong so it can be tuned down to not be able to take many hits or might not be that strong in the beginning until darkness merges with it.

I feel like Bliss has done the exact opposite of helping her control her urges but instead amplified them and pretty much is manipulating her through her urges.