Daichi_TBR193
Thanks for the chapter 👍. And author I have a request, can you evolve Ben base form or his race as a human? Like making him evolve into some kind of like a higher human race, which includes him being taller, stronger, faster, smarter and appearance wise making him more good looking then he is right now. And as for the technique to evolving him, you can either use magic or science or both magic or science?
Bro, I'm a BR who entered this world of novels and FANFICS for a little over a year, it literally opened up a new world of stories for me to suppress this day-to-day boredom, BRr authors are a very rare thing and all the few I've seen I I tried to give my moral support so that this group can try to grow more and more, I read a little of your work and I was very happy with the quality of it. I had been looking for a good Ben 10 fanfic for a while and the only two I got were already very quiet. rhythm. I hope you continue with your good work 😄 I was very happy to see that you released the chapters even though it has been almost a month since the last one and finally it would be good if you updated your Discord link since it has expired I would love to have more contact you and your readers ( agora que eu terminei isso não sei por que me dei ao trabalho de escrever em inglês 😂)
You are eliminating a lot of villains very quickly so by the time Ben is 16 there will be no more frequent villains to fight or any big villains since he will have eliminated them before they can make their debut, how about then you create a discord to discuss what new arcs and put villains like this as characters, and reduce the power of Ben 10. I don't know what people have with making the protagonist the most powerful, but the charm of a good series is lost when you try to overemphasize something that you can solve in another way. Whether it was script luck or help, that gave charm to the original series until they overused it.
There's something else about Death Angels that you may have overlooked, how durable they actually are. The fell from the sky like meteors, that alone says that they can: Survive in extremely hot and cold temperatures Withstand a monstrous amount of force. The G-force their bodies would've had to endure to reach Earth. Still have the energy to go on a killing rampage. A meteor burns at 3000⁰F before it hits the ground. It can survive for a long time without Oxygen.
Question! With you adding other series to your Ben-10 universe, could you perhaps add one or all of these universes? (I feel they would mesh fairly well with your universe!) 1:Stan Lee's Mighty 7;Beginnings!🎉 2:Clockstoppers 3:A novel called Zoom's Academy for the Super Gifted/or its movie adaptation Zoom:Academy for Superheroes!(their powers can be explained as the result of genetic mutations from their human ancestors pulling a Captain Kirk on an alien, and sometime down the line, boom human kids awakening super powers.) These are just some suggestions and ideas to (hopefully) help stir your creative juices!😅