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this was very confusing. Karin pulled a Susanoo here. was stadium really that big enough to accommodate a giant construct of iron?. was the stadium really that big that Temari had enough space to not being hit by karin's wild attacks? does that mean karin is unbeatable because she is in the armoured construct of ADAMANTINE chains? temari is taking it easy even against uzumaki style Susanoo does that mean she is powerful enough to cope against any ems or ms uchiha character like itachi, obito and sasuke? is it me or are these character too powerful even in the early stage? I mean I get it if they are powerful enough to face against any jonin or even kakashi but I got the feeling that they are beating other kages too easily. too confusing.
Начальные главы этого фанфика мне очень нравились но потом становится скучно MC не сильно развивается,даже его предела сил не показано а позже ещё хуже я действительно не понимаю как такая хорошая история могла так сильно ухудшиться,сюжета вообще нет, одно только битва на экзамене на чунина идёт несколько глав и половина слов идёт на ругательства вместо того чтобы быстро закончить эти скучные главы их оттягивают,я уже бросил эту историю иногда просто просматриваю есть ли какое развитие а оказалось ничего не изменилось
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finally caught up !! great job guy, one of the best fanfic about narutoverse i've read ! well i didn't read more than 10 but still ☺ just like one of your previous runt said it, you first need to find a story you actually want to read... i had 400 chapters to read so it wasn't boring...some chapters were, of course, less smooth to read according to my preferencies but all in all...keep up ! and thank's