not bad !! if you can keep up the fast pace while still keeping the chill times and occasional action and actually have an ending not rushed but still quick then great ☺ ...well if mc can bring two or three girls home before going out to see the world.. i guess it won't be his lost !

well...as waifu and waifu material both girls enter the "don't bother with physik and logic" kind of caracters 😅

finally caught up !! great job guy, one of the best fanfic about narutoverse i've read ! well i didn't read more than 10 but still ☺ just like one of your previous runt said it, you first need to find a story you actually want to read... i had 400 chapters to read so it wasn't boring...some chapters were, of course, less smooth to read according to my preferencies but all in all...keep up ! and thank's