Comments of chapter undefined of New World - A New Beginning

I kind of imagined something like this. I guess it acommplished something though. Jean won't question. BUT still Does it really not piss anyone off that he talks crap even though he's just a weakling? Just make war break out so Jean targets and kills him.

Ugh, again, how is he 'Two' when you explicitly said in the first chapter that he was the undefeated CHAMPION up until he finally lost? If you want to retain some consistency in your backstory, just revise his background and say he's the top CONTENDER, not champion.

I find it stupid he is still letting Hugo live. Is he waiting for his family to be killed to get off his lazy butt? If he waits any longer he will be out of time. What is he waiting for or is he an idiot?

HOW DID SHE DIE?

loyalty to their rulers? Don't you remember that the rulers in your past killed them both?

Right so talk of war and sIdes instead of planning how their combined influence and prevent it. So much for two smart battle hardened characters who came from a battle planet wanting to keep their new lives stable. Really like many parts of the stories but these inconsistencies reallt bother me.

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Don't mind me

thx for the chap

oof, will he ever posses all 8 elements? I know it's a stretch but that would be so cool...