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finee_k1yrReplied to Entrail_JIAlso Author, please make the story longer. Just makes sense from the pacing of the story. With the third cataclysm in 5 years it just doesn't make sense to end the novel in less than 100 chapters. You've written 500 chapters leading to around 5 years for the characters. So like...changing the pacing of the novel would really feel like it would be rushed. (I dont mind for more filler chapters and arcs to make up Ren training for the third cataclysm)
- finee_k1yrReplied to Entrail_JI
So yeah, I'm really hoping for Amanda × Melissa for Ren. Emma is for Kevin 100%. Jin...I know his personality kinda fits Melissa more if that's what your going for author but like...nah, Melissa is another gem for Ren lol. Not saying Jin doesn't need any romance but his extremely cold character really just seems he really doesn't need one and o ly cares about training. The man is probably more obsessed with catching up to Ren than anything right now. I also know Melissa is also that type except she's a research fanatic. Just judging from the amount of screentime she had with the mc compared to Jin. It really makes alot more sense if she also ends up with Ren instead of Jin.
- finee_k1yrReplied to Entrail_JI
You're probably not going to see this since I'm writing this so late but man. If you decide for a harem put Melissa in the mix. Obviously Amanda is the number one candidate right now; however, Idk why but I enjoyed Melissa and Rens bickering almost to the point where they seem like a old married couple. Their conversations is so unique compared to how Ren talks with other characters. Tbh Melissa is really a loose cannon as she comes off as if she hates his guts but really doesn't. With her venomous personality it would really be fun to watch how she would get closer to Ren with her personality as well as how Melissa would handle it etc. But since this is coming from when the story is already 500 chapters deep I don't know if author has any plans for her or not.
- finee_k2yrReplied to Adham_Helmy
If the guys good looking common sense for people can go out the window. Though, only if there good looking. Dunno if the mc is or not yet.
"I have to be there for the grand meeting of the students from overseas," she said before adding, "alright, we can walk there. We still have around four hours before the meeting. We can talk and have some fun there until then." - finee_k2yrReplied to OlsenChua
if you have the ability to pick up context clues from the last chapter his death will obviously be due to that drink his crush gave to him lol
Death and Reincarnation... - finee_k2yrReplied to RUlost_Darlin_4088
Sometimes being a disappointment will bring more trouble lol. Better to just be average or a little above to live peacefully.
'No..no… Don't expect anything from me. Just let me goof around.' thought Angus - finee_k2yrCommented
that's good the author put a limit to the skill as I dont want the mc to be overly reliant on the skill. Still want to see that character growth!
I really wanted to use the skill right here and right now, but I knew that it was inappropriate. Moreover, with my current mana capacity, I could only use the skill for approximately thirty minutes. Though it was not long, thirty minutes should be enough, as my stamina was about that much anyways. - finee_k2yrCommented
I like how the author is putting good character development for the side character too d:
Arthur was not surprised to hear Mages' Academy of Smot had a nineteen years old Student Intermediate Mage. Perhaps lost to Kain in a duel had taught Arthur a lesson of recognizing that he was not the ‘Chosen One’. There was and always will be someone else stronger than him in this universe. Arthur didn't know if Krynt Browser has mastered the Intermediate-tier yet or not. But he will never allow himself to look down on the other again. - finee_k2yrCommented
For those confused it's just a 6v6 but its split into 3 matches. Each match they can choose to put 1-3 of their members to fight in that match. Thus emphasizing more strategy in the game.
Then the last round will be 1 versus 2. - finee_k2yrCommented
THANK GOD THAT WASNT HIS ACTUAL PERSONALITY WHEW!
"Not a problem, that is the character you must play to avoid suspicion. I delivered a genuine report to the Principal four months ago. There should be no other concern about your identity at this Mages' Academy." - finee_k2yrReplied to finee_k
dont*
On the other hand, although Nolan acted shocked on purpose. He was really very shocked! This kid's idea on how to use magic was too scary! - finee_k2yrCommented
Exactly bruh y'all really too bloodthirsty edgelords smh
He believed Kyran could become merciless when it really came down to it. After all, he saw how he half killed most of the army officers when they escaped from the forest. But his merciless state was only triggered if his life was in danger. If he knew there was a way for him to escape unscathed, he would act... well humane. - finee_k2yrReplied to Valinner
lol that's like saying why dont racist parents teach their kids not to be racist. A child is influenced by their parents so it's not unrealistic in a time period where there was an actual hierarchy to this extreme lol
"How dare you speak to me without permission? ... Do you know what family I belong to? … I'm Mason Martinus … Bow and plead for my forgiveness you peasant!!!" The boy sneered. - finee_k2yrCommentedWithin those five days, Derik focused on running little errands for his neighbors to earn money, even though the reality was cruel and unfair to him he wasn't going to give up easily.
- finee_k2yrCommented
yay mc is mature and ant causing a tantrum
"Crap… reality is cruel" he muttered. He threw himself on the bed and slept off a few minutes later. - finee_k2yrCommented
bruh where tf are the articles/adjectives in this paragraph...
"No, I am not a pedophile. I am not interested in loli. It was just from random anime I saw, maybe I imagined you to look like a character from that anime." i said defending any misunderstanding directed towards me, "Anyways you do have one beautiful dimension" I said as i looked around. - finee_k2yrCommented
Lol as an educated person he would also know that his reading ability is as illogical as transmigration
The voice was exactly the one that he heard before he fainted, and it was obvious that it was the cause of his peculiar situation. Besides, as an educated person, Leo didn't believe in real transmigration. - finee_k2yrReplied to Lindsay_Strong
Well it is technically still in a beta stage, ussually in that stage people need results fast to see if what their doing is good and fix any mistakes.
"The fact that you have made it here is already an accomplishment, so I am very proud of all of you," Prophet continued his speech; his smiles, enough to overwhelm the huge scar he had on his face, "You are the very first batch of students of America's Mega Academy, therefore, I can't promise that your stay here will be perfect. But what I can promise you is that once we are ready to let you go. A year from now, you will come out of that gate a superhero…" - finee_k2yrCommented
Guards an't no Simps!!
"Invader!" Man one shouted as he attacked Sarah with his spear. She jumped back, "Capture her!"