Comments of chapter undefined of Shades of the New World

this has a similar start to Supreme Magus which is my favorite Webnovel. So far I am quite impressed with the prose; there are a few grammatical issued but the breadth of the author's vocabulary is pleasantly surprising and the dialogue seemed well written (if a bit prosaic). If the plot is any good at all we might actually have something special here.

What kind of MC will we have please no hero type

nice chapter. u got me hooked with that remark about ''gods and their whims' lol. the grammar seems fine overall except for some tense problems and the reason given for his souls existence and the cycle is appreciated by me becoz most of the novels just gloss over it. nice job, Imma continue to read

Bless up, someone doing reincarnation correctly. I have high hopes for this story.

First chapter is a total hook. I always have minor dissatisfaction with reincarnations that plop adults into fully formed bodies at the most ideal times. I like the added difficulty-level of 'from-birth' reincarnation - seems more realistic.

Good luck Author, can't wait to read the following chapters after reading this one.

Is a good start

Wait, this is amazing. Who writes like this?So much said with so few words. One chapter is somehow enough to give a full understanding of the MC and the mentality he is beginning his new life with. Who are you?

Wow! interesting start! I hope this will become big later on!

A nice start had to reread a couple parts to make sure i was tracking everything but you have my interest.

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Its promising

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