Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Alexander_the_grey
Chapter comments23
Ngl this chap just pissed me off tbh. He gave away everything he is. He might as well start telling them he is from another world. Might as well ask people to kill him. Also, the three are three "friends" are turning out to be hypocritical af. I mean I wouldn't want to be friends with them anyway. The mc has basically been told to tell them everything he is or be abandoned by them. Why are they not telling the mc about everything? How horrible of a relationship is it where you have to tell them everything to stay friends with them while they don't tell anything in return.
Ngl, I liked this fanfic at the start but now I don't think it's that good, average at best. I don't like MC's behavior and how he do things. Like he could have stopped the opening of the chambers of secret but no he didn't because he didn't want to interfere with the plot but he still went to save Harry and Ginny just to appear as a hero. This chapter made me give up all the hopes for this fic l, it was so awkward to read this chapter. Good luck with fic, hope you don't write such an awkward fic next time.
I find it annoying he has to tell them everything yet he does not tell his aunt anything important. i mean come on she is the one he should trust the most out of everyone given that she rise him, and is the one closest to be kill by volycunt and his death bitches. To get information from is so call girlfriend he has to dig it out or find out on his own yet she pressure him to be honest about his affairs?? and the wild child i thought he learn to respect people privacy as he's done this before with the m.c past. and the so call saint well he's a saint so I don't know. it just annoying having people dive into your secret without thinking why it's call secrets.
I did not even try to read the whole chapter. Him just spilling everything is just meh. lately MC just agreeing with what Dumbledore did to Harry while he 'helps' the guy(his help to Harry did not even mean everything, Harry still Harry. how can not even one event change. Author's just now using canon for convenience not even thinking of new plots due to changes brought by MC.) I see this as just the same HP but with the MC. I won't be surprised if Dumbledore will be on the brink of death but MC will appear to save the day. Fanfic started great and I really want it to have its own plot but author do not want to, instead just rehashing the same harry potter series with new characters that doesn't even change canon. lol. meh ╮ (╯▽╰) ╭
