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You all talk about the words used... but did anyone understood that the author was calling a wagon a mother****er?
I won't drop it, lately I just really don't have the time and needed a pause. I will restart soon and indeed. My goal wasn't to make the MC like this but more shift his focus to his store and employees because in the end that's what the atory will be about. I totally agree tho thatI completely messed this up.
No worries ;)
Well, I would say the release rate and the power ranking as your novel just doesn't have enough promotion... by having a chapter each day, the readers will normally give their powerstones daily instead of 3-4 times a week which makes a great difference. Also, last thing. In the author's note section. Just write something like: Do leave your powerstones if you like the novel and if you want to have more chapters here's the patreon.... (with the patreon here). That's all in your author note. If it's too compact, readers will just skip it for the next chapter ;)
Loved the chater and I could only hope for a second one today... ;) nineteen years seems fine to e and love how you used it I'm sure it can be used as a way to push the students to greatness. Also for the quirk at some points, maybe once he really overuse it a lot, he can show some kind of breakthrough or something like collecting back lifespan or something well youre the author and I love your novel ;)