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Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Silver Angel

Lukasan
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HadesChampion
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better make sure the mc gets padme dude , she is the best waifu. fck anakin

ShadowXK
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We need

TehStorm
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If he wants to create his own order he needs the power,money and the connections to back it up. At the moment he can't even fight with a lightsaber and has zero fight exp,not to mention that he has no money or connections besides padme.

GreekAres
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Please choose Padme as a romantic partner

Vicii_foryu
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At first I thought it was going to be like a rewrite of the eternal fanfic but its starting to change the direction and I like it. It would be good to see where you take this new order. Also it would be cool to see his lightsaber colored Grey. As to represent his alignment. Just an idea, if you like.

SORRYFORTRAFFICJAM
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taking anakin as an apprentice and freeing shmi would prevent so much of his angst

Druidpriest
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Awesome job! keep them coming .

Scientistx
ScientistxLv6Scientistx

he needs to rescue anakin's mother though if he doesn't anni would still snap

yhwach
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is the mc gonna be with padme

WolfLord
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I think you should only show changes to a status page from each chapter and have an auxiliary chapter with his status skills and abilities so this way you're not wasting a couple of hundred words or so on writing down his status. Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Atlas_cf43
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thanks for the chapter ☺️

PhantomNite629
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thx for the chap

cheeki_breeki
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Pls for the live of god dont drop and he needs to work on getting a form to 100% there all 0%

TuftyMuffin9530
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Good more plz

Raffael_Santis
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Thenks for the chepter.

Brezer
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it was getting good then character short spam grr. too bad obi wouldn't go, with his negotiation skills and force balance it would be crazy

DarthVegito
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It would be interesting if he had to create an order of sorts of grey jedi but with specific rules like the sith having the rule of 2 but with obviously more force users than 2

DarthVegito
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Loving the story!

stinkclaw
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It's gonna be fun to see how the MC tries to explain how to use the force without using light or dark. Because that is something they tend to not mention in the stories and movies. otherwise I want

Undead_Shinobi
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