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Comments of chapter undefined of Deep In The Mud

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Purplebride
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Your writing is unique and I think I'm in love with your story. Just a little advise and I mean no offense but I think you should try paragraphing your work more. You know when you load a lot of info into one paragraph it might seem long and might bore the reader. Just my opinion and I will try to let you know of the parts that you need to break into paragraph. I'm sorry if my comment may sound nosy, I just thought it's a nice piece and wanted to help. I'm not perfect myself and I always let other authors peruse my book and let me know how to make it better. My apologies in advance.

Akia200
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No apologies needed. Thank you for your honesty. I love it when my readers give me feedback both positive and negative because that's the only way l can become a better writer. Thank you for the support

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Serial_seresposa
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You make me envy your writing. I usually add poetry to the mix but you just place in a touch I can't even fantom to reachđŸ’”â™„

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Sthembiso_Khoza
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Wow l loved it [img=update][img=update][img=update] I'm still reading about to go to chapter 2

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Wendy_Gugu
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They always say how you start a book determined if people will carry on reading, you killed you intro...am so intrigued, can't wait for the second chapter

MelBri
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Ronisha_Blalock
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😀😃🎊🎁

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JetStrider2131
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