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Serial_seresposa1yrReplied to Kelly_GoodwinCh 297 Chapter Two: Hundred: Eighty_Nine: In The End, Death Wins- Serial_seresposa1yrReplied to stella_7097Ch 1 Chapter One: The Battle In Which She Dances
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Where on earth was she? She couldn't piece together what had happened and her brain seemed frizzled as though tampered with and she didn't know what to assume or think of. She felt petrified and wanted to cry out. She wondered where James was and why she felt as though she was far away from home. - Serial_seresposa2yrReplied to
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A note was on the floor instead and I slowly bent down, keeping my eyes around as I picked it up and came up with it. opening the note, the color in my skin drained as I read the note. - Serial_seresposa2yrReplied to Daoist5vBmcj
you want a family tree?
Disclaimer: Alright everyone, keep up, we're going to be switching POV's a lot for the next three chapters. - Serial_seresposa2yrReplied to Kelly_GoodwinCh 254 Chapter Two: Hundred: Fifty: Heir
- Serial_seresposa2yrCommentedCh 253 Chapter Two: Hundred: Forty & Nine: Alliance Shred To Love
- Serial_seresposa2yrCommented
okay firstly is it weird that I'm in love with the bad boy or is it just my tendency to be toxic? but anyway advise to you author, watch ur word structure here and there but other than that. I love it a part of me is like I need to come back and sink myself into ur work again because wow I'm more than content
Ch 6 Chapter 6 - Serial_seresposa2yrCommented
"This" not "that" be careful of your word structure
To anybody else, that would have been just another beautiful summer day. The sky was bright blue and clear, the sun was shining warmly, and a gentle wind swept through the trees, making the leaves sing their harmonious song. - Serial_seresposa2yrReplied to Raksha1
- Serial_seresposa2yrPosted
I Don't know if it's just me or not but my mind played your book as a 60's movie. Black and white, suit with those stylish hats and stuff but hehe maybe it's just me. Anyway, I loved it honestly, I couldn't stop reading it. one issue other than that it was really good, didn't like the fact that there weren't more chapters. But I enjoyed it, storyline carries on gently but it's still too short. But I'm looking forward to more.
- Serial_seresposa2yrCommented
Too not two.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Serial_seresposa2yrCommentedCh 1 Li XiaJun
- Serial_seresposa2yrCommented
Okay! I struggled to find a way to leave a review. I apologize so ill have to settle for a review. The story is good but I got lost and confused at certain points. One thing about readers too much information makes them lose their attraction to the book. There's a common saying, "Show, don't tell." you need to be able to show the readers not just tell them. They'll become restless and stop reading. I zoned out for a bit when I continued reading then had to stop my music and get back into it. It's good stuff but don't make it easy for us to be easily distracted.
Ch 12 Beast types - Serial_seresposa2yrPosted
So, I enjoyed the way you introduced the world. I kinda felt like I was on a rocketship, overlooking the different worlds. In a way it was really cool I felt like a kid for a second but then another part of me got lost at certain places. I'm used to the cry of pain being 'Ah!' not 'Ha!' that confused me for a second. Then I saw you made a happy sound 'Ah!'... as I said that confused me. Then I noticed an error in continent and that's fine as it easily can be fixed. Then I wanted the story to go and not drag on but overall it's a good story. Looking forward to more.
- Serial_seresposa2yrCommentedCh 8 Chapter Eight: Past: Surprise Threesome
- Serial_seresposa3yrReplied to N_Stephanie_SantosCh 22 Chapter Twenty-Two: Blind Sighted
- Serial_seresposa3yrCommentedCh 1 What bull-feces is this reward?!