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MelBri25dCommentedCh 320 A Proposal?- MelBri25dCommented
Correction: "...and be there for him."
"Go," his mother also sighed. "And be for him." - MelBri25dCommented
Correction: "...but for whom isn't it?"
"Gustav is innocent. Interrogation by the police may be unpleasant for him, but for whom it is? Gustav is a grown man and will cope. If he needs legal help, that's what lawyers are for. If he needs a father, that father had better be healthy for him." - MelBri25dCommented
Correction: "David scooted a little closer..."
Olaf greeted kindly and continued his conversation with the ladies. David squatted a little closer to Gustav yet. Meiden could sense the warmth flowing from him. Oh, if only to sink into him like this, like in a warm, safe bed! Snuggle up as if by the glow of a fire from the fireplace! - MelBri25dCommented
Correction: "scared" not "scarred"
"He scarred my horse. He stood toe-to-toe. When I tried to control him..." - MelBri25dCommentedCh 28 The First Date
- MelBri25dCommentedCh 27 Yura, you're back early
- MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "...and went to the Captain's office."
"Okay," both Jack and Henry replied and went to Captain's cabin. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "Good! Tell me when the other results are ready."
"Good! Tell me when you would be ready with the other results," Journee patted Sienna's shoulder and left the lab team alone. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "Go complain to David, ..."
"Go complaint to David, that idiot gave you the medicine," said Journee. - MelBri28dReplied to MelBri
Correction: I meant, "Instead of making a human train, why not make a human circle?"
"Then Journee can help you out. Instead of human rain why not make a human circle," suggested Sienna. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "Instrad of a human train, why not make a circle?"
"Then Journee can help you out. Instead of human rain why not make a human circle," suggested Sienna. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "...report me, don't report me,..."
"Yes, I am, that's why I passed every exam in one go unlike you. How many years you have been trying to become a sergeant? You even took years to complete your course in criminal law," Journee closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She looked at Kimberly and said, "I know you hate me, and I am not really interested in the reason why you chose me to be your rival. Hate me, love me, report me, not report me, I really don't care. Just do your job properly and leave me alone." Journee threw the disposable cup in a nearby dustbin with force and walked away. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "How many years have you been..."
"Yes, I am, that's why I passed every exam in one go unlike you. How many years you have been trying to become a sergeant? You even took years to complete your course in criminal law," Journee closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She looked at Kimberly and said, "I know you hate me, and I am not really interested in the reason why you chose me to be your rival. Hate me, love me, report me, not report me, I really don't care. Just do your job properly and leave me alone." Journee threw the disposable cup in a nearby dustbin with force and walked away. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "...take the investigation on a different path."
"You were the one who delivered the camera. You were responsible. Your job was to hand the camera over to Sienna not just walk into the lab and place the camera on a table. You always take the easy way out that is your problem. I don't who taught you that but FOR THE FIRST TIME IN YOUR LIFE STOP BEING PRINCESS AND ACCEPT YOUR MISTAKE!! Accept that you always do a lousy job. If you can't remember, think about what you did with Michael. You almost send him to jail on murder charges because you were too lazy to take the investigation in a different path. You had a simple way, so you didn't even try to properly investigate the crime," snapped Journee. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "You almost sent him to jail..."
"You were the one who delivered the camera. You were responsible. Your job was to hand the camera over to Sienna not just walk into the lab and place the camera on a table. You always take the easy way out that is your problem. I don't who taught you that but FOR THE FIRST TIME IN YOUR LIFE STOP BEING PRINCESS AND ACCEPT YOUR MISTAKE!! Accept that you always do a lousy job. If you can't remember, think about what you did with Michael. You almost send him to jail on murder charges because you were too lazy to take the investigation in a different path. You had a simple way, so you didn't even try to properly investigate the crime," snapped Journee. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "I don't know who taught you that but for the first time in your life, stop being a princess..."
"You were the one who delivered the camera. You were responsible. Your job was to hand the camera over to Sienna not just walk into the lab and place the camera on a table. You always take the easy way out that is your problem. I don't who taught you that but FOR THE FIRST TIME IN YOUR LIFE STOP BEING PRINCESS AND ACCEPT YOUR MISTAKE!! Accept that you always do a lousy job. If you can't remember, think about what you did with Michael. You almost send him to jail on murder charges because you were too lazy to take the investigation in a different path. You had a simple way, so you didn't even try to properly investigate the crime," snapped Journee. - MelBri28dCommented
Typo: "trial" not "trail"
"After arraignment, all perpetrators are supposed to wait for their trail in Riker's. You know that. If you want to question him, ask him everything there," said Noah. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "His slicked back hair ..."
All turned around and a smiling face greeted them. A man in his early forties walked in with India. The average-height man was sharply dressed in a black suit. His slick back hair was enhancing his sharp looks. - MelBri28dCommented
Correction: "...into Graham's office..."
William and Journee walked into Graham's cabin where he too was getting ready for the press conference. He was in his uniform talking with Jack, Henry, and Kimberly. Everyone looked at each other and greeted, "good morning."