Comments of chapter undefined of CHAOS DEMON EVOLUTION SYSTEM

The grammar is terrible...

what a dumbass mc

I really like the premise and the way you've done it, but do you think you could get an editor or something, as the grammar is kinda bad, no pressure though, I'm living this anyway

Seems obvious from a bystanders viewpoint. Your family has someone with immense privileges by virtue of their strength. The weapon he wants to make would take all that away and give any rando the ability to kill those they were jealous of. 🤷‍♂️

Burh i love This

another generic betrayal type story. But I'm rooting for it. let's see what's unique in this.

You have the main character from Tokyo ghoul on the cover

I love your thoughts at the end

Author you need an editor or a grammer check cause this is terribly written and it kinda turned me away from it just read another one with bad grammer so yeah should look into improving your novels earlier chapters before you lise potential readers

Poor grammar , this chapter is disappointing it is poorly written , lets see how the next chapter will be better

Im glad your back[img=recommend]

Nope. stereotypical drivel means no need to read further.

Awesome first chapter.

Nice.

Its good and great

Cool and interesting

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