Comments of chapter undefined of The Might Of A True Uchiha {Completed}
The Might Of A True Uchiha {Completed}
SomeSpookyGuy
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oof, usually I don't care about isekai fanficts because I read them for my excuses to not writing my own fanfict. And I read a lot of OP shits (with absurd powers) but this one, bruh. But I'm writing this comment to bash you or anything bad author-san, I just want to point out some ridiculous shits you just put into your MC. After all, it's your fanfict you can write anything you want. But if you want to read my whole comment I appreciate it, I'm not a great writer at all, I barely reach 20 chapters in my book then rewrite it and now because I'm lazy it's still on the 2nd chapter. So what I just want to point out is, the chakra (idk if I spelt that right, I'm not a fan of Naruto) anyway, goddamn that an unnecessary huge amount of chakra. For me, in the aspect of any energy type either it is a chakra, ki, mana, etc, it's all about quality and efficiency than quantity. It also seems more believable for me and other readers who like to nitpicking about stuff, the MC can have an above-average chakra pool and still be OP with a high mastery and efficiency over their techniques, that's why I said that your MC chakra pool was unnecessary huge. With your MC current state that even is not born yet, he is basically a god in the Naruto world, with his chakra alone. Naruto with his Kurama chakra is OP enough in the original story, Sasuke could rival him with an above-average chakra with his much higher proficiency in techniques compare to Naruto. In my opinion, Sasuke could be a great character if he didn't become an emo. Naruto was basically an overpowered character from the start of the story, he got beaten up because he was a really stupid mofo. TLDR. Your MC already has the genius character trope, with you adding the chakra it becomes redundant and just ridiculously too much. I wrote this not with the intention to tell you to change or fix it, but if you want to then it's cool. I just hope that when you write another OP fanfict or original you would consider my thoughts. OP character is okay, but if it's too much OP then it gets bad real quick. P.S Please take my words with a grain of salt, I just read until your 2nd chapter and I saw potential in it from your way of writing.
no are you serious ?! what are you smoking brother? do you understand what shit you're feeding us? I know that I don't care about my opinion, but I see such a mediocre author for the first time. (Yes, I read a lot of shit, but they weren't blown away in the first chapters like yours) people give you advice or make comments on your mistakes, specific! just what the plot holes do, so that you fix it or take it into account in the future, but no, you don't care! brother, you don't even see your mistakes, even when you are pointed out to him. before it's too late, I would fix chapters 30 and not 100 later. stubborn as a ram. in short, go find a job brother is not yours, have pity on your readers.
