So far it is the worst novel by this author, compared to other novels the force system is horrible, the worst thing is that readers try to help but the author doesn't care, just don't cry with negative criticism

I might even swallow the absurd loyalty to my brother, after all, he's family, but it started with the slavery plot, I overlooked it again, and then Garp shows up out of nowhere. Man, I realized that in this damn story there's only going to be garbage plot after garbage plot. I can't keep reading this.

jump to ch 5 and you understad my hate .......................................................................................................................

chines ?

A slave to the system, Mc cannot breathe without permission from the great and powerful system. .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

if you take my hermione i kill you

This is my protest against the crap I just read in chapter 290. It was so ridiculous that I had to come here to read the author's name again. Seriously, I even went to his profile to make sure it was the same author as the other stories. The author doesn't do a fantastic job, but they were pretty good. The guy just pulled a god out of nowhere, invented another dimension that no one cares about, and turned everything into garbage. I wasted my time with 290 chapters; do you have any idea how long that was? It's like watching One Piece for 1500 chapters, reaching the end, and getting a pair of underwear in a treasure chest.

kamikaze

I know man, but oda said this in SBS (interview) I only say this for you, I'm just saying that if a normal human can lift 500 kg in the anime world with a Dragon Ball Z level limit, 300 kg of calisthenics is bullshit

man, this is just an information dump, the first chapter was very good but there is practically no story. like two whole chapters talking about Targaryen I thought: this is a novel or a wiki, then there's a chapter just talking about the Roman Empire, seriously man, the author is a champion at kill the desire to read

ok man that was so stupid seriously, the stupidest plot I've read this year (apart from Chinese novels), depending on how he writes the next chapters and I dropped

simplesmente incrível ri demais. sabe ler isso me fez feliz. isso quer dizer que tem qualidade obrigado pela capitulo

more plz , i like this novel.

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There's calisthenics with weights, I know that wasn't the best example, but that's what came to mind first, and you know there's a lot more to it than that.

drop or not ? it is the question

sick

bored man

I am obliged to give this note as a sign of revolt. it's a smarter luffy with a lot of nerf and gender switching a fun read, like 3.5 or 4 stars. because I gave 1 star, if I made a list of it, it would be endless and boring, but I'll give you an example ... Calisthenics maximum level ... 300kg. My revolt is okay to nerf but that's an exaggeration. it's like I'm going to give MC the one for all of boku no hero ... after 10 years of training he reaches the supreme level ... 300kg of strength ... like world weightlifting champion Geórgio Lasha Talakhadze lifts 470kg . .. to the author if you read this, man you are in one piece world... the world of white beard that according to the author (Eiichiro Oda), is on the same level as super sayajin 1 (young white beard) from dragon ball . reading this fanfic i feel the author is an idiot or he is saying i the reader is an idiot.