Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Starting from the Bottom

Mom as main wife?

I like the story but your dialogue tends to come across as too formal when characters are not speaking in a business setting, which in turns makes it kinda stale the best way to see this is say your dialogues out loud to yourself and listen to see if they come across as natural or too rigid. It’s easier if English is your first language or your very fluent in it. I’m not really sure about that, but good luck.

Great beginning which novel did you have mc steal from the future

Im here

is the mc immortal???? like wolverine

Good Work

thank you mister Author 😍🥰

great chapter love the powers your mc has as invisibility is rare and perfect for a thief and professor x as repeatedly shown in the comics that telepaths are not to be underestimated

The powers are good. Invisibility and telepathy. And I have a feeling he'll get more eventually. But they seem pretty weak, and the limitations are pretty arbitrary. Only 15 minutes of invisibility, he can't turn it off and on at will, and an hour cool down between uses. And telepathy that he has to be totally calm and meditative to use, or else he's immediately mentally exhausted. Those are really weak, and don't really act like mutant abilities at all. They seem like computer game abilities if I'm honest, and not ones adapted to real life, but still based on computer game limitations. Hope that changes quickly.

Thanks... all I see is single personality... and you keep describing their emotions... not expressing it through words. but i find it interesting...don't know why...

he should have kept the glasses and be one of those cool guys from the animes

i think he should have still taken his scholarship, bc he still wont get far with just owning part of three business

raised flag

He needed some evil laughter after having said that

exp

dude, what age is the mc? I mean he can go to a casino so I suppose it's already ***** age and he just recently accepted college. but investing it means he has to at least at drinking age or 22 in us so the company wants to be invested. i don't know at what age has mc supposed to be

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

Thanks for the chapter

Thx