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Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

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TempoWhiteKid
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Claire_Kingz
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Author-San am wandering what the mc will evolve to will he have wings because that will be so coooooooool 😻🙉 please author take my advice and let him have wings pleassssse😣 and will moby and each member in the demon family have their true demon appearance and form like demons have wings and horns tho 🤔 also when he evolves it should affect his personality a bit like his emotions will hardly show on his face since he is going to be the future demon king he needs to a bit cold but it's not that necessary I still don't mind tho🤷

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Claire_Kingz
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I can't wait to see when Natalia will die she should die a very cruel death😈......ahhhhhh am so excited can't wait.....this novel is getting more interesting😻😝🤩 but am still wandering who will be the next member in the demon family tho so curious 😯.....is it Alex?🤔 Well let's leave that one for later😊 ....author u r the best thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work I will never drop this novel and am expecting the second chapter but shouldn't it be 3 chapters today? because u updated only two yesterday🤔.......and I hope mody can complete the quest and not get cursed tho 😥

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Axes
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This chapter was better than the last but i am a bit sad with the way you write natalies personality and how she wont be added to the family but i think its also cool because if the blessing like in typical novels the MC would have some major plot armour and fall down a cave thats been there for hundreds of years and get some super treasure that only helps him a little but and the next arc the same thing happens but this is different and i also like it..... So thimbs up from me!

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John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13John_Smith_3884

I am so glad that the girl is technically not dead. This is very good and fits well with what has been going on with the increase to the mc's power level so far. I wonder if this will provide a change in the kind of demon he will become. maybe something along the lines of a heavenly demon. he has not fallen to only following his emotions and desires but also has not committed any uncalled for violence or evil. Just like how the personality has effected the class the two girls got the mc will probably recive something tailored to him in such a manor that will help him in a way that he can continue to stay by his ideals and not fall into temptation.

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fengxueer
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This is just garbage all the " character development" mc has been shattered for me, now he is just pathetic hypocrite and I don't know how he is any different from Nattalia in this scenario.

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KneeCapBandit
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Oooh, i wonder how shell feel during the betrayal, will she feel heart broken? Will she feel indignant? Will she feel rage? Well find out soon...

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Hancry
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I feel like Author was going to make Natalie a "member of the family" but then, changed it midway, resulting in this annoying and contradictory turn of events. It pisses me off😡

omgitzricky
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Breh idk y u gonna kill her off for being obbsessed and shii i understand what she did to jayden but man this mc is a child🤦🏽‍♂️he cool and all but the way he thinks sometimes is retarted...

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Demonic_sage
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thanks for the chapter

Singularity21
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I wonder if he’ll convert Neia’s siblings. That might be an interesting turn of events when he meets her in the future

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BXIV
BXIVLv14BXIV

dank, it's so broken bro.. but okay..

Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

Mcs now got a holy blessing... This gotta do something to his evolutions

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devonta
devontaLv13devonta

Awesome

Sololeveler
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tortle
tortleLv3tortle

I am a bit sad that natalia is not going to be a part of the family becaz hey! who doesn't love a yandere in a fantasy novel u know? lol but anyways...its all good

tortle
tortleLv3tortle

It's so ironic...like the angel was so pure that she cursed her killer for a disgusting death.

Nanohana
NanohanaLv2Nanohana

But wait. Shouldn't an angel's blessing prove resistance against demon skills not holy skills??

DCKID85
DCKID85Lv13DCKID85

Im glad natalia gets to die! Im only fear is that the author makes Moby’s angel blessing become a power if friendship thing and share it with the group! It needs to be a Moby only skill!

Zach_Deluca
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See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Chowder_DX
Chowder_DXLv1Chowder_DX

Aww man. Rip yandere girl, you will be missed (probably by me only)