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Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

DaoistThunderstorm
DaoistThunderstormLv5DaoistThunderstorm

You have done a good job till now! The story is really engaging!

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TheForestHeart
TheForestHeartLv15TheForestHeart

I do see the similarities with the vamp system, but I honestly like this one more. keep up the good work! looking forward to more chapters

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InHisName
InHisNameLv6InHisName

I'll be honest. There are similarities BUT in my humble opinion the Great Demon System is the Vampire system but a 100x better. I read almost a hundred chapters of Vampire system without feeling a single emotion, it's completely bland! This story though, it's so colourful and rich! It invokes so much emotions in the reader, and that's a characteristic of top-end novels! This story has my support. If the story continues at this rate, it'll soon receive my stones too!

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ItsDarkness
ItsDarknessLv10ItsDarkness

maybe you could like put a note or revise the first couple of chapters. I agree with the others in this comment section that your story is better then the vampire system one

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Reisgem
ReisgemLv13Reisgem

don't let those kind of comment down,internet is a monstrously gigantic,it's impossible create something completely new, ppl always will find similarities with a novel a and novel b, unless u are copycat to the core with inst the case, just fallow your heart when you write, and I find yours much better than vamp system

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alucardtfs
alucardtfsLv14alucardtfs

dont buddy thanks for the chap

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Darth_Kitsune
Darth_KitsuneLv4Darth_Kitsune

Will mc have a harem of lovers like a proper demon or only one waifu for himself? And can we count Jayden as his future love interest?

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rafa101
rafa101Lv12rafa101

You could edit the first few chapters or give the system some more unique features at the start to make it less like the vamp system.

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Ezuku
EzukuLv10Ezuku

Quick question if he turns an E rank into a demon, besides from the initial boost from changing races and the extra ability could they continuously get stronger?

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HollowGod
HollowGodLv5HollowGod

thanks for the chapter ^°^

Lannydar
LannydarLv14Lannydar

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Dark_Eyed
Dark_EyedLv12Dark_Eyed

This book is way better than MVS, All the things I wanted to see in MVS are here and it makes it more and more exciting to read.

valifor69
valifor69Lv14valifor69

I love this novel!!!!!!!!!

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Carol_Yochum
Carol_YochumLv15Carol_Yochum

I am enjoying this story very much. please continue what you are doing. This is as good as a Christmas present for me. Laughter is the best medicine and I've gotten my share and more.

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_Sylph_
_Sylph_Lv4_Sylph_

Some people come to this novel because of its similarities. (me cough cough). And the differences only make the story more interesting. Keep up the good work 👍👍✌️

BlueEyedOracle
BlueEyedOracleLv15BlueEyedOracle

I actually was attracted to this story because it is a lot like MVS in the beginning.

optimus9000
optimus9000Lv4optimus9000

You could have made the MC into the doppelganger demon instead of Jayden. She's more op than the MC.

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Orin_Porter_3943
Orin_Porter_3943Lv2Orin_Porter_3943

this book is awesome so far and I'm excited to read more, you are doing an amazing job at writing, keep up the awesome work

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There_isR3ALITY
There_isR3ALITYLv14There_isR3ALITY

I just found your book today and am absolutely loving it. The sadostic behaviour and lack of desire to change the world of the MC's is so different from all other system novels that it is like a breath of fresh air. I love it an dplease continue.

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Luisfe_Sanchez
Luisfe_SanchezLv2Luisfe_Sanchez

This is a way better version of vampire system. Love the brutality. Now just waiTing for more adUlt content

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7_09
7_09Lv137_09

Although it started similar to mvs you took the story in a completely different direction making it a whole new experience. Also it's been cool seeing your progress as an author, the writing style has gotten better and feels much smoother now. Keep up the good work bro!