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DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommentedThat was long! It must have taken such a long time to write... I really appreciated the witch's backstory, showing the other side of her character. Hope you can continue writing! Grammarwise, there are some faults here and there at the beginning of the chapter but did not affect much. Thanks for the chapter!
Ch 1 The Eerie House within the Forest: Alternative Ending- DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommented
Finally! A name!
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In fact, the author made use of the geography of China to design the Gu World. Northern plains for the Mongolian plateau, with barbaric characteristics. Eastern Sea as Japan and neighbouring islands. Southern border as the South Asia countries, full of jungle and to the west, the Western Gobi desert that stretches for miles. Of course, Central continent is China. I am always amazed at how much thought was put into this novel. This is why I allow myself to think of the Gu world as that part of the world...
Ch 42 Middle of nowhere - DaoistThunderstorm2yrReplied to The_Adventurer
Frankly, I would rate it a solid 3 for the moment but this is compared to other books of this type(My house of horrors) but still incomparably good compared to others I have found that focus too much on the gore stuff...
Ch 1 The Eerie House within the Forest: Part 3 - DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommented
Hi there author! I just want to say that I appreciate your work till now. It was a pretty good start but I would like to remark that letting David and Ben assist the most crucial part of the ceremony and successfully interupting it is a bit of an inconsistency in the story... The atmosphere build-up could also be extended a little more to highlight the horror or shock-factor of the scenes. Thankfully, I enjoyed reading the near-perfect grammar and will remember the band of memorable characters. Good potential and I look forward to next chapters.
Ch 1 The Eerie House within the Forest: Part 3 - DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommented
Old habits die hard.
Along the way, Chen Ge and Zuo Han had been conversing. After they left the hospital, they finally could talk and share their information without any worry of people listening in on them anymore. At around 12 midnight, Tang Jun drove Chen Ge and Zuo Han to Li Wan Street. This old street was located at the eastern side of Xin Hai. It was the final stop for the bus on Route 104. It was extremely secluded and normally people would not come to visit this place. - DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommented
Otherworldly love path dao marks... to bring some love to this world!
"Thieving Heaven Demon Venerable had otherworldly space path dao marks so his Thieving Heaven's true inheritance space could block the future venerables. In Crazed Demon Cave, when the hole of chaos appeared, Thieving Heaven used his otherworldly space path dao marks as the main force to seal it." - DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommented
*Ding* NPC Twelfth Hair has issued a new quest!
Twelfth Hair nodded: "I do know something… about your father. But that is from long ago, if you want to know, help me with something." - DaoistThunderstorm2yrCommentedCh 1 When I Woke Up
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Fang Yuan: "I do not seek immortality. I seek eternal life!"
This chapter has been deleted. - DaoistThunderstorm3yrCommentedCh 559 A Cousin's Reunion Pt.6
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Brother Lu, the Muscle God. Respect.
Second, this mc will be comparative to Shanks, the only anime character I actually respect and wish he existed in reality. Although, Nik won't go as far as to get beer spilt on his head, so with much consideration, you can think of Nik as the combination of three personalities— Lu Sheng (Way of the Devil), Shanks (One Piece), Sanji Vinsmoke (One Piece). - DaoistThunderstorm3yrCommentedCh 40 A New Target
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Vicious lolipop thieves!!!
They loved to plunder and steal. Even taking minor things could cause them to feel excitement and joy. Their very nature was to take things from others and make it theirs, satisfying this nature for them was exactly like satisfying a certain other human nature, it brought them ecstasy. - DaoistThunderstorm3yrPosted
Honestly, I have already read the raws and it's completed. Story is interesting, especially the power system and the different characters who really aren't generic like in a lame jap slice of life. Overall, it was a good read, give it a try. Will definitely come again if the story gets completely translated.
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Onii-chan! Would you like dinner, bath, or.... me?
A capable younger sister was great to have. She knew what you wanted. - DaoistThunderstorm3yrCommented
Coffin dance meme here
They would take nine shallow steps and one deep step every cycle. As such, the palanquin would rise a little, and the porters, along with the two suona players leading the way, would hop every cycle.