Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

can we like talk about the ALWAYS WITH Moby this, Moby that and Moby there. like come on Bro add something like 'I', 'He', 'Me' anyway that's all good Novel tho

Finally the explanation and im quite satisfied with it :) i hope that after this without that necklace absorbing his negative energy, mc can finally be right on track. But you say the seal can only be broken with enough negative energy, so mc barely got enough negative energy after being tortured or something? What would have happened if the necklace broke but mc didn't have enough negative energy?

yayyy! kind of wish this chapter came sooner. the story might have gone a lot more smoothly if the first chapter was about Moby's first day at military school, with it ending on the necklace breaking. we could have gotten to the good parts a lot quicker!

So he was just controlled to an extent so that makes sence now

i sorry to say author but its not for me. If demon lord maked the system tobgim him powers why he have a shop and quests ? from where he gets the items and quests really ?

Im not sure if I want to continue this story as it seems like its a ripoff of vampire system....

this novel is like a mix between solo leveling and my vampire system I LOOOOOOVEEE ITT!

???? Demon lord needing negative endrgy? I'm down with that. The system selfishly taking the negative energy of its host (aka parts of its host) and saying you need to be worthy, annoying but acceptable. The so called system that the demon lord used, fine. But what I can't get past is the system needing money and the dumbass not questioning it. Like, add explanations. The system is just a visual interface, the so called stats are just representations of your state and the stat points added give you access to/unlocks a small portion of my powers. And the armours, weapons and accessories you see are all mine that I stored in my (only accessible to me) storage/in my soul. And the money needed to buy that is merely for the emotional value you humans put on it.

I can't. Just can't. Good premise, bad execution. At least to me.

i just swiped up nonstop when it came to the system stuff. y? bcuz it will hurt my reader soul if i read it already knowing what the content will be 🤷...say hello to the other parallel universe

Don't really understand why the system needs money for the items

There's just too much lacking in author's techquie here which is to bad because I really did want to like this.

me earlier chapter: tsk trash... me rn: oh it's a GOLD

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OK this isn't for me. Writing is bad and the mc is dumb as **** like he doesn't know the words mind and intelligence. They are fucking self explanatory even if INT doesn't says nothing about magic, just boosting intelligence for this retard would be far more effective.

It annoys me that even though he can thunk logically he just thinks ‘oh demon lord in my head cool gimme power for revenge’...

I think this story is mixture of MVS and solo leveling comic.