Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

I'm just skipping all this till he gets his system and stops being DUMP

I am honestly shocked at the behaviour of the kids. They have essentially no humanity in them at all. Every single person that Moby encountered does not have a shred of empathy and many are psychotic having fun torturing innocent Moby. I can't believe they don't even feel a little guilty. I have a hard time relating to any human in this story.

So he is dumb

I mean... he practices a martial art called Blissful Demon. So it saps all negative emotions turning them into demonic energy. The byproduct is to make some irritatingly positive and easily bullied to absorb even more negative emotions... pretty genius technique.

that necklage made him dumb, he looks like he come from the moon

What in the fuuuuu*k. Why is he so retarded? Like cchrist author, i can barely freaking read this crap.

The beginning of the novel is atrocious. I can understand if you want to copy a world setting but this is a bad copy of MVS. If the Mc only had low EQ i would understand it because of all the suffering he went trough but making him utterly stupid is just bad writing. If you want to make a charakter development plot, this is the wrong start. Nowadays there are dozens of antihero setting light novels, which you could have used as reference. I hope the novel will turn for the better.

And dropped

.... he's poor as f?... I thought when people from the military dies their family gets some kind of compensation.... I guess not since he's so poor? or is it just this novel?....

dumb mc. and is it necessary to make almost all the humans in this story not human at all? and dumb author.

Not gonna hold back !!! Fuck you author for giving such a bullshit of a name and for introducing such a lame fat ass villain 🖕🏿🖕🏾🖕🏼🖕🏻🖕

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

man, it's taking him a while to get the system mentioned in the name of this story... I'm being held out on what I want to see!

Why is everyone saying that they will drop this because the Mc is stupid. If he was just strong and cold it would be so insanely boring

I'm rereading this story right now and I really forget how awfully positive moby personality can be before getting his system lol.....

Novel like this just give people negative thinking about people. Author just give mc bad background at will. If all people like that, i am shocked human not vanished from war with alien. no empathy, no humanity, just bullying the weak children of soldiers who die on the battlefield are ignored and treated badly. does anyone still want to defend?

it's kind of difficult to imagine that we, the human race could survive if an actual alien race invaded us, with or without "abilities". those aliens wouldn't even have to do anything, they would just need to watch as we kill eatch other off lol

dropped

the moby Kane stupid and like his name MC has proven to be stupid too.

Are u kidding me u are just copying the novel my wolverine system Chinese novel which is ongoing and pasting it here are u serious, u slightly changed the wolverine blood to demons and in that the MC has a ring which used to absorb his negative emotions and here he has a necklace, stop being shameless and come with your own creativity