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Comments of chapter undefined of I woke up in DanMachi world with Solo Leveling system?

CarlosSalazar
CarlosSalazarLv6CarlosSalazar

jajajjajaja Miach could have killed him by trowing him at the denatus without defense, it was a really strong posibility that becouse Miach did not trust him, he was going to have him killed... and the mc just accept it? being abandoned and bettayed becouse your god didn't trust you but never tried to correct that??????? this is wierd man... "yeah you wanted me dead, no biggie now hug me"

Retack
RetackAuthorRetack

Have him killed? When was that.

B0ssu
B0ssuLv2B0ssu

This "reconciliation" came across as more fake than a daytime soap opera. While Miach had to reason not to trust him, for the MC to just forgive him for trying to get him killed, and fold completely takes being a beta simp to another level, completely inconsistent with his previous character.

WiLeYBiGhEaD
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv11WiLeYBiGhEaD

This felt off. The stuff with Miach has felt off for a while. I can understand Miach being upset about the insignia part, but the rest was enough for him to try and kill him and abandon him to the other gods? The mc just accepting the reason of ‘I want to follow the rules’ is also unbelievable. This is Miach openly admitting that he will do the same thing again in the future without remorse. This is the red flag where you leave the familia for good because your patron god is willing to sacrifice you at anytime to ‘follow the rules’ or for ‘the greater good’. But somehow the mc accepts this? It should be the opposite as even if Miach trusts and cares for him from now on, he will still sacrifice him or his other children to follow the rules. The Gods in danmachi cannot change as they are bound by their divinity. In Miachs case he is too kind to the point of hurting those around him. i.e giving out potions for free when they are in debt. getting a massive debt for nazhas prosthetic arm. etc. But instead of being kind to his own child in his familia, he is distrusting and antagonistic? Accepting that war game was a garunteed death scentence for his children, especially nazha who he is supposed to care about. I really dont get why he would stay in Miachs familia. Now that he has the interest of the gods, he needs the backing of a powerful god unless he wants to become a plaything for those who are strong enough to not care about the rules. The mc themself is aware of this from his thoughts in the early chapters about which familia to join. He joined Miach for no other reason than a god he could trust and got betrayed. Now he wants to stay instead of negotiating a better deal with another god? I think the mc didnt heal properly and has brain damage.

Bakimaru
BakimaruLv2Bakimaru

The last two chapters you were trying real hard to patch up your plot holes. But I think you went overboard with this chapter and jumped the shark. It's like reading cheap drama which doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

lyoin
lyoinLv4lyoin

before anyone comes at me and tells me "you should just quit if you don't like it" consider looking and who is in the top 3 power stones donation in this novel. that just shows how much I liked this novel. and I can only give 3 per day. do the math. I am extremely disappointed. this chapter felt like the author suddenly turn passive. not the character. I remember the Mc being willing to take on the whole city if need be. what happened to that guy? Miach's answers were downright stupid to the core. I can sit here and give you names of gods that would have kept the secret to their "grave". giving the falna is taking responsibility for the child's action. we see this all the time in danmachi. when something happens it's the god/goddess what people go talk to. I don't know anyone that will leave it to the child 'cause "he can do it anyways ". "he has a vessel other than falna" okay yep you figured that much great for you woo "you took my power" okay, you gave him that anyways soo...? that's just a childish argument about giving back possessions "you came to me because you wanted my power! " okay, remind us why the gods left tenkai? it only takes a single chapter like this one to make people drop it. but may great once for them to like it.

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Classic_Goose
Classic_GooseLv4Classic_Goose

Tch. No MC name mentioned in this. JUST YOU WAIT AUTHOR! I WILL GET MY HANDS ON THAT NAME PART! I WILL!

Quid_the_leach
Quid_the_leachLv5Quid_the_leach

Miach made valid points. Well, we all knew that the mc was just bullshitting all along. Kinda refreshing that Miach didn't buy it all up like in most novels.

Elder
ElderLv11Elder

Its ok chapter. So..

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

Such a fake 'Heaven'.

DON_FLUFFLES
DON_FLUFFLESLv4DON_FLUFFLES

Thank you for the chapter, this is one of the greatest fan fictions on the website.

neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5neobenmike

This chapter is so forced that it is cringe

69PAIN69
69PAIN69Lv1269PAIN69

Well 50/50 the will of fire is getting smaller by each chapter(sight)

Generalkoinzell
GeneralkoinzellLv3Generalkoinzell

feed me more.

Draken_Phenix
Draken_PhenixLv14Draken_Phenix

moooooorrrrrreeee

MagicSand
MagicSandLv6MagicSand

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

DemiLucifer
DemiLuciferLv11DemiLucifer

Thanks for the update Author-san ♥

Times_Avatar
Times_AvatarLv3Times_Avatar

Keep Going And Thank's For The Chapter

Eltoxico69
Eltoxico69Lv4Eltoxico69

Meh, Needs to be rewritten

H3dr0n
H3dr0nLv4H3dr0n

update soon