Comments of chapter undefined of Dawning Skye

ohhh amazing start!!

Love it, Irish, Scottish, Highlander story it must be. Only first chapter, I will soon find out. Off to the next chapter.

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Good

I'm new to this site and your story caught my attention so here I am. I like the description in this chapter and how detailed it is! Although I don't get how brown eyes can be bright...just saying. We get a good picture on who our main character is and what her values are. You did a good job at letting us see into her mind. Very exciting start!

Best first chapter ever!! I am hooked!

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Amazing start!!! Im intrigued!

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I love it.

wow this is good

Fantastic start. I care for the hero already.

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A beautiful storie..very exiting every single paragrap..

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Love

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