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Books that are written by me: 1-Accidentally Married a CEO 2-The President's daughter 3-The Billionaire’s Contracted Wife. 4-Torn Between Twin Brothers
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I understand, it was just a suggestion. if that’s the point you’re trying to convey to your readers, you need to elaborate a little and make it clear. So, she doesn’t look bad at the beginning. ❤️
Change the phrasing, take out stealing. It’s a turn off. it means she’s a thief. You ’re starting her character as a bad person. You could say, she lost her job because the company closed or something.
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In the synopsis, it says she’s 24 years old. If she had been working in the company for five years, it means she was hired when she was 19. so, she got her B.A. at 19? Just asking. Please, don’t[img=recommend] hate me.
I reall want to continue writing, and finish the story. If only I don’t have to work full time and to be healthy… where I don’t get stressed and be sick all the time. 😔 If only all my readers will donate 1 dollar to me monthly, I will be able to write full time and quit my full time job. That ’s all I wish.
Now I understand, she is also his bed partner.
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