Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

The story is good but the sudden change in plot where it is showing he is hunting ir oearning something and then it switches to someone elses pov without finishing what he was doing and with no warning is really annoying to me at least.

The sudden change of perspective as the first comment said. Also what happened to the golden dagger from Solomon? If he needed a new weapon wasn't that supposed to be a high level weapon why use a saber?

a high level criticism would be that mc has no agency, the events seem meaningless and entirely plot forced, that's not exactly bad if people like the forced plot Normal criticism: it seems that you are stuffing too much stuff together you know the feeling when you are taking to something and you want to talk more but the conversation just fazes out and you suddenly found yourself doing something you don't hate or love the void in the chest, feeling as if you just missed something, feeling unsatisfied with the inconclusive

It seems even the heavens don't favor you. nice roast. I'll probably use it by having someone yell something about how they prefer me and say it.

It was his father. I'm sure.

Is kira a guy or a girl since wolves have genders.

thanks for the chapter I was speed reading!

this is a beautifully written book and I love the concept thus far, seems like you are not sure if you are doing this right, ill tell you now that I will continue to read if you continue to wright

thanks for the chapter

author I love this novel so much. thank you for your work. I'm not sure why it isn't more popular but hopefully it picks up soon!

Some incomplete scenes but still interesting

I do quite like this story :)

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I really like the story. The pace is just fine with me. Good stuff takes time. y'know!

nice work so far can be a bit confusing but still a good read

the story is great a so far. can be a bit hard to follow at first but it's getting easier the farther I go

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

one quick thought, it is getting hard to understand how Arthur compares to everyone else as far as power level is concerned. While the other characters may not have quantifiable levels it would be a lot better to know how far apart in strengths they all really are