Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

What is up with the plot skips? He is Testing his willpower and boom it switches to a girl then boom switches to anither grouo and then boom switched to him and then girl fighting? Its super annoying :( i just wish to read your story, not the summary of your story.

screw this! so you skip one of the only interesting parts again. then you have him help some random person who wants to screw him over to win three trial. so what, he helps her screw him over and gives her the crown. this is a test. it's not a charity. he's trying to get stronger not make friends in a Japanese anime where making friends is all that matters in the world. this is total nonsense. what is this story even about.

dude the way you build up suspense is like when the mc attacks a boss you cut away to the side characters faces reaction. not saying you to don't do pov jumps but do it without disturbing the moment.

Next mc meets a random, friendly person with a smile. Approaches, makes conversation and befriends them. Then says something and gets stabbed and kicked when he's down. Followed by getting robbed. That would be more probable ......

come on, i was hoping to see how he passed the first test... whats the point of reading about the mc struggling with a challenge, only to skip to him rescuing a freaking random girl. this is very confusing, frustrating, and annoying. pov shifts are fine, time skips are fine, just dont skip the freakin plot or character progression!

this part seemed rushed, incoherent, and not well written.

thanks for the chapter

well this really came out of nowhere quite weird but I will just keep reading

First he saves the girl, and then trusts her to hunt with him. Very trusting young man.

Este autor hijo de puta ya me aburrió

Different!! Not sure what to think but I’m going to stick with it and see how you Develop it

Good!

h

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Thanks for the chapter

well, although people find it rather hard to read with the keep jumping POV. myself personally kinda like it, because I hope it will eventually, at some points, all this POV will intersect and conclude at one point, cause if it not, than, all of this is pointless. and another thing, it is great a way to build tension in the story, so later on no comment such "when the heck this people come from" or "try to make forehadowing, author" something like that. welp, keep going author. gud job