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Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

Operon101
Operon101Lv1Operon101

Does writing get better after this ?

Badr_Zh
Badr_ZhLv5Badr_Zh

These skips have started to annoy me. Just when the mc starts seeing some results you skip to another character. Also world building, we still lack a lot of info like the structure of the world and it's power system. And things like the gates and dungeons. We need more info.

InvisiblePill
InvisiblePillLv5InvisiblePill

the what 7 Family. and who the hell is on the cliff. this happening is irrelevant to the current situation.

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kaban
kabanLv14kaban

who is Hazel? đŸ€”đŸ€”

William_Litsch
William_LitschLv11William_Litsch

thanks for the chapter, but why is he taking a trial he didn't want to take and knows nothing about? isn't this too heavy handed interference by the author? it's like saying, "screw what the character world choose. I want the character to have this." them he cheats through rather than put in effort. not really very exciting that way, but better than quitting. but there's the question. why wouldn't he quit? he had no intention to be there anyway.

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aftermath
aftermathLv4aftermath

nice, thanks for the chapter author

VanshRaj
VanshRajLv4VanshRaj

thanks for the chapter

ABHI_9013
ABHI_9013Lv13ABHI_9013

Thanks for the chapter

The_archer1202
The_archer1202Lv15The_archer1202

honestly none of these characters entice men in the slightest, the MC is bland and inconsistent, and there seems to be more side characters than world building since you seem to avoid it by switching scenes for new people introductions each time

BlazinBean36
BlazinBean36Lv15BlazinBean36

Aldoth_Edwards
Aldoth_EdwardsLv10Aldoth_Edwards

Still some grammatical errors and typos

Aldoth_Edwards
Aldoth_EdwardsLv10Aldoth_Edwards

Interesting waiting to see how these intersect

Ayuwaa
AyuwaaLv12Ayuwaa

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

HUGO_RIBEIRO
HUGO_RIBEIROLv1HUGO_RIBEIRO

Sério mano, o segredo do cara jå foi revelado aos outros assim do nada sério mesmo? 3 personagens que tem habilidade de ver algo do mc , ficando chato sério mesmo...

Niloysom_Das
Niloysom_DasLv5Niloysom_Das

Good!

Freddie_Martinez
Freddie_MartinezLv14Freddie_Martinez

ds

Miguel_Vargas
Miguel_VargasLv14Miguel_Vargas

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Jebat
JebatLv7Jebat

Thanks

Lannydar
LannydarLv14Lannydar

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Audun
AudunLv14Audun

Thanks for the chapter