Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

Arthur wondered if this was what it felt like to have an older brother.* this is the right way, since Arthur in the normal sentence is saying he is the older brother.

Seems like a classic set up for a betrayal....

Author you should get rid of the word roared and replace it with shouted. The only time someone would roar is if they are very very angry or in the middle of battle and they are trying to scare the enemy or build up moral in before or in the middle of battle. It is almost never going to be the word roared. It will normally be the word shouted.

Mellow Drama

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thanks for the chapter

Thanks

author, you clearly have writing skills, as well as intelligence to write a comprehensive story, so why is it that you're neglecting world-building/setting? its as if you're allowing the readers to just make their own theories and guesses as to how the world is set up and operates and what world it is at that?

There are *** on page 5. It's causing a bit of confusion

completely useless timeskip that actually takes away from the story

i see more problems :P

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Good!

Naisuu time skip right there~

so far so good!

thanks for the chapter 💖 ,this feels a little more realistic than other novels of same genre

Thanks for the chapter

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At first it's a bit repetitive, but then it surprises you with a couple of things, although the protagonist is not entirely to my liking, it's an entertaining work. 3 nice SMILE.