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Comments of chapter undefined of A New World, an immersive game experience

MythIcalPheonix
MythIcalPheonixLv14MythIcalPheonix

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Evelyn_Wiles
Evelyn_WilesLv15Evelyn_Wiles

MC had at least a few opportunities to be a leader. He was assigned the role by the NPC leader and he's supposedly an awesome strategist. One of the chapter comments stated that he had no right to order people around in this situation, because it would just make people angry at that point. I agree that this would have happened, if he had bounded in there, throwing orders around. You just can't do that without first instilling trust, respect, or fear. And, trust me on this... respect bred from fear isn't true respect., but is rather comparable to the respect one holds for a wild beast. A leader doesn't have to order people around to get things done. 1. A leader leads by example and 2. A clear assessment of the situation, along with: a. Providing promising strategy recommendations. b. Requesting alternative strategies. c. Being open to changing the plan on the fly and clearly communicating the need for this option, along with - how to tell when a change is required. That's the leadership short list. The ability to primp like a poppinjay and politicize/ladder climb (oops... look good and socialize) is just frosting... until they forget that they cultivated those skills in the first place to accomplish good deeds. Because if their aim was different (evil) originally, they would be relying on inspiring fear through acts of intimidation and brutality.

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DKYMuffinman
DKYMuffinmanLv5DKYMuffinman

Liking novel not too bad. I trll you what this company doesn’t plan on making Money in the long run making quest this hard lol.

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Debracadabra
DebracadabraLv11Debracadabra

Tips: Scouts need to be unseen so as to be successful in accessing and returning therefore scouts wouldn't use horses. Usually only calvary would use horses in battle. Can you pm me? I liked your response to my criticism and I know you want to improve which I see your writing is getting better. Thank you.

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William_Litsch
William_LitschLv11William_Litsch

thanks for the chapter. i do appreciate that you put in the effort to explain the battle. i wish the MC did something or prepared better though.

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Obsidian_Owl
Obsidian_OwlLv15Obsidian_Owl

[img=exp]Thxs for the chap[img=exp]

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tom_de_leeuw_8866
tom_de_leeuw_8866Lv3tom_de_leeuw_8866

find the players mentality a bit unrealistic "mages are to op" did this part better so maybe take some inspiration from there and adjust their mentality to be somewhere in the middle

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Aurelion
AurelionLv5Aurelion

I want to see the players band up to overthrow the city because using them like that completly removed all trust between the parties. Even if they are immortal it doesn’t mean they don’t feel pain or can’t lose xp and items they worked hard for. Absolutely unacceptable from the NPC side and a stupid move

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untaken
untakenLv4untaken

It might not be pack leader...

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lszarei
lszareiLv2lszarei

Thanks for the chapter

Debracadabra
DebracadabraLv11Debracadabra

I didn't like this garbage showing up on my phone through notifications.

Debracadabra
DebracadabraLv11Debracadabra

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Slasher11
Slasher11Lv1Slasher11

You're really playing up the whole "everyone except the MC is stupid" aren't you? He's not even pro and there are supposed to be millions of players so it makes absolutely no sense for him to have been the first to try anything. Also do gay people not exist in your universe? MC's favorite NPC is always talking about how they're always only liked for their looks, disregarding the fact that that's entirely what the MC did, I find it odd that she is somehow everyone's type.

BStar
BStarLv3BStar

Thanks 😊

gaminologue_lebeau
gaminologue_lebeauLv14gaminologue_lebeau

You're glad because you were not ready???? Glad means happy, right? I don't understand...