Evelyn_Wiles
I am an avid Sci-Fi reader. I prefer an upbeat, save the day kind of MC, but as long as a story is riveting and interesting, I'm willing to give it a read. Especially if you include novel concepts.
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Read books
Hmm. OK. That makes it sound more reasonable. Thanks.
Well, if you shoot for average, that's what you'll get. If your aim is fairness in gaming, while picking your stats, you've broken your character and your purpose in playing.
So perception... i.e. evil rumor mongers can steal your good karma by spreading lies about you?
*motivational
Sorry, but it isn't coming across as a moti action issue. They were saved, regardless of the motivation or method of saving. The term you're looking for is altruism. So, you didn't save us out of the graciousness of your heart. You had an ulterior motive.
*how
True. But, though it isn't my cup of tea, that doesn't men it isn't a well written story that actually has a storyline. I've seen enough horror that has no storyline at all.
sea or ocean floor
Ha ha. Spellchecker strikes again.
Isn't that vampires?Your book though.
dystrophya disorder in which an organ or tissue of the body wastes away."myotonic dystrophy"antonyms for degeneration:rehabilitationenhancementimprovementevolutionprogressrecoveryadvancementdecencyhumblenessadvancedevelopmentforward movementgrowthrallyrecuperationriseameliorationascentbenefitbettermentbig step forwardchange for the bettercomebackexpansionfurtherance
sipping?how about:suckingpuffingsmokingdragging (less commonly known to non-smokers)
mother and brother
a period -> prayed
Muscular dystrophy is a degenerative disease. You need another term here, because you've described him as quite muscular.- A hereditary condition marked by progressive weakening and wasting of the muscles.
He she,boy girl...which is it?
And on this paragraph, sold?
Do you mean seller or salesman?