Cyclxne
This chapter is the break point when u decide I'll drop the novel, the author decision for deciding for MC to show his power is wrong, the story would have been much more interesting if hides his powers for a long while, creating much more interesting scenarios, to show his power for a stupid event like this .. Daah
ughhh!!!!! why the hell did he do that ffs? even if he wanted to duel, he should have used only one element but no, he had to show off.. now every enemy of his will become alert and all those who bullied him will also be on alert and try to eliminate him even before he grow strong.... such a stupid move.... thats why i hate these revenge stories..... when MC gets his power and even at the lowest of power ranks, starts showing off.... bull-shit....
Felt like him revealing he had magic was done too suddenly and felt like it was done where it felt like no big deal that he had magic now. Also the girl felt like she was insensitive, even if she was nervous, to expose he has magic when she could have done it privately or not gone through with it once she realized what she is about to make him do(even though he went along with it). I don’t know just felt forced in a way and pointless on how it was all done which is why I didn’t care for it, though just my opinion.
awesome..I love mc who don't hide his full power..I mean yeah you should hide but not all of right..out of 21 elements he can control he has just barely shown 3 so it's very good....and if I'm not wrong in a duel with a wagger..the wagger should be place in someone's hand so the other party can easily get it..but here he is fighting with wager on his neck..👀
hmm, he revealed 3 elements at once which was too much, 2 would have done. If not one was fine as well as a protagonist must knows that he shouldn't reveal much of his strength. Also why the pendant is still being wore by him while absorbing magic energy? It should be in his dantian since it's already his. It feels like an exterior strength.