Comments of chapter undefined of The Mage of Primordial Chaos

**** you, thinking that this shit romance would get better and every time I read it I get even more angry, waste my time waiting for something

disappointed

Is the author special needs ?

so the death of his parents left a shadow in MC's heart. I hope that this shadow get vanished soon. Also what is that ****ing sound that tells mc to kill her. I don't want a mc with dual personality. I want him to be one but that doesn't mean, I want a hero personality o him, which is self righteous to me. Let him be one personality only. Feng mian should be killed. Yes. As she is MC's potential enemy.

Info dump during fast paced scene throws off readers. A bad habit of many writers.

Harém: Qing Yue, Feng Mian, Yu An Xue.....

I hope he kicks that guy into next week.

could've been better if the guy was an anti-hero. righteous mc's are often naive and dumb. worst part, the hypocrisy they show is disgusting

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international monetary fund .-.

uhm.. all about the pendant, what it did to him and that others seems to know about it... is it some kind of fabricated stone ment to give someone the chaos element. his mother optained it somehow. but how to "give" someone the chaos element that wont go with other elements? you have to be void of any other element to begin with. that MC had non seems to be fishy in this way. so maybe that he had non was also fabricated?

Thx for the chap

God, so stupid, gasped sharply that he has a younger sister who takes care of him, and all his feelings for her, and went to give up life for someone who wants to steal the only thing left to him by his mother ...[img=faceslap]

I'm out

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