Comments of chapter undefined of Gate of Immortality

Gate of Immortality

starry8sword

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tuba_sanLv3tuba_san

Try to space out your sentences and aim for shorter paragraphs. Also for system interface, try to write it like '[System] blablabla [Quests] blablabla' by spacing it out and giving a system feel.

3yr

XulLv10Xul

Is it just me or is the grammar and style getting worse every other paragraph?

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TianLong5212Lv4TianLong5212

thanks

2yr

Oladele_VictoryLv1Oladele_Victory

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Immortal_WhiteVer2Lv10Immortal_WhiteVer2

Sorry i have to correct my theory either the immortal (Yan) or the pendant/necklace or whatever the thing he was wearing is giving him an actual system

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itiswhatitis_0101Lv4itiswhatitis_0101

👍

3yr

readtokilltimeLv13readtokilltime

wish the grammar was better but, thanks for the chap

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Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx for the chap

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DNHELOLv13DNHELO

Noice

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