Comments of chapter undefined of The Gene Gamer
The Gene Gamer
Ordinarystranger71
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So it takes us less than 2000 years to colonize the entire universe ... talk about impressive. We’d have to colonize something on the order of 1,000,000,000,000 planets, moons, or other, every single day for the next 2000 years. Dang, we are good. Maybe you should have made that date more like year 385,000,000.
I've honestly read worse, 300+ ch of monster integration lol omg the amount of errors in it, amazing story but Jesus Christ the errors, but yeah love ur story and where it's headed but writing is boring and u can definitely get rid of a lot of useless words as my old english teacher but them, doing something as simple as that is enough to make it tons better like one short paragraph u used a lot of "they" and "them" or using "the" when u could honestly omit it and would sound way better, try it out bro.
