Pwnzer
I agree with the others in the comments. It was a great chapter. Would like to know how much damage the adventures suffered, though. I appreciate how Ed went from not wanting to cooperate with the dungeon to just doing his best to secure it. And the skills he might gain from the level up, well the author should decide. Cause depending on the skill will lead to were the character should go. Crafting skills, for traps and weapon creation. Magical skills for better magic knowledge and speed manipulation. Fighting skills, for physical combat. Stats based skill for body constitution and development. I wonder what will be. I might be wrong, I don’t mind. This series is awesome either way.
Yes it doesn't matter what the authors intended direction might have Ben it all comes down to the quality of the wrighting itself (stong visualality that pulls the reader in inspite of himself,outstanding coriography and the dance of death on the head of a.pin, an axistance on the razors edge of life and death wounce a story has all of this nothing else really maters