Comments of chapter undefined of Paragon of Sin

thx for the chapter this novel one of the few that is really has a very good power system ☺️

Dude, Kevin… my brother, my homie, my everything! Why is there a cliff hanger and why do I split these battle scenes? They are far too fascinating to be split in multiple chapters. I’d rather no chapter come out and 3 coming out at the same time than this, or u could count it as a bonus, idk; anyway chapter was amazing but it was a transition chapter and IMHO those are not needed in a fight scene cuz there is no such transition and this chapter was made a little bit less impressing given the juice of the chapter wasnt juicy at all XD, but then again I probably missed my point and I didn’t want to critic anyway, just letting u know.

Wuyin mowing down ascended like they are made of grass.

I was pretty invested based off of the first 5 chapters. Can you make the summary better? Probably but in my opinion this is the best book on the app and I couldn’t put it down ever since he killed his clan mate who let the little guy in to save save his life in chapter 1/2! Ruthless and skilled!

Tik Tok. Wuyin be popping out them kills his KD is getting pretty good. Thanks for the chapter, looking foward to more!

Starting to kinda feel like CEDS, WW is slowly becoming unkillable and stronger than everyone else.

The synopsis is alright but could be a little more detailed. It’s been a while since a started reading but the tags are what caught my attention rather than the synopsis. 🥳

Madara approves.

The synopsis is good.

I think the appeal of your novel is the unconventional cultivation genre story, WW is a unique take on the usual a-typical xianxia mc so maybe you could incorporate that. also RULES OF NATURE!!!!

thanks for the story~ I think the synopsis is fine. after all it invoked enough interest in me to start the novel but the setting, characters, personalities and progressions kept me here.

THE BEST NIVEL BRO

1000+ dead in just 3-4 seconds

this is like musashi versus a hundred men

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thx

Thanks for the chapter.