Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated in the World of My Wife is a Beautiful Ceo
Transmigrated in the World of My Wife is a Beautiful Ceo
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Bruh do whatever you want to do with this story. I just hope he doesn’t act like a sheep in wolfs clothing, i.e wearing dirty clothes, driving a crap car and just acting like he’s broke. I think the original author to this story wrote Yang Chen as having many girlfriends is to add more plot to the story and put him in different situations. I just hope you don’t make the dude into an emotionless husk of a man, always stone faced and indifferent to everyone. That would just show that he has the same mental deficiencies those sect crushing sword flying xianxia protags unfortunately have.
Well he forgot the main problem of MC. That Yang chen is mentally ill, also he might go beserk if he keep his emotion and desires in check. Also, you might not like harem troop but crushing every flag may cause story difficult to progress in latter half as yang chen is main link to every fudging incident that may happen in that world. Teleportation is No No. Because he will come under radar of every single big shots. And even with memories of yang chen does not know about cultivation so how can he know about space laws, Athena can directly snatch the God stone from space as she is grand master level space user. Rouxi has the biggest issue of trusting anyone in single meeting ,also she would die than to apologize. All her fault in personality was because of past trauma she can't change so quickly, as she was changed little by little after meeting yang chen. Also she chose yang chen only because he had *** with her and cannot let this embarrassment to pass. She either die or will marry him. You can change story time line and events and meeting but cannot change characters personality. Please don't be offended it's constructive criticism, you can apply in next story to make it wonderful. Nice try by the way, please don't stop one day you will produce a masterpiece as story is well written with little grammatical mistake and nice flow.
Rings. Make rings then combine them into one ring. Each ring made would be of some kind of stat. Like strength, durability, wisdom, intelligence, creativity, will, charisma, luck, perception etc.. when you think of something else it would also be added to the ring. Don't know how to cook? Add cooking. Don't know how to cultivate? Add cultivation. Don't want to cultivate? Add auto cultivation, Afraid ring gets lost or stolen? Add bindings. Too many bags? Add storage. Add universe. Add worlds. Add concepts. Add everything and anything infinitely. All in one ring. THE ONE RING TO RULE THEM ALL!
Man ur destroying ur fanfic like anything..if i was offered i would have atleast inquired whose her fiance , as he will become my rival and may try to kill me or something .then i will ask for compensation or atleast make her realise hiw dangerous it is to marry her As for not remebering he has already slept properly..y do u want him to sleep again and again.. He should write down stuff from what he can remeber and keep in his dimesion dah! This fanfic is even more idiotic than the orignal..although i appreciate u trying
