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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

RoT_Death
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Ryan_Moore_7543
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I'm actually kinda hoping for a time skip rn. like don't a massive one but maybe 10 or so years to let quin Layla and minny live peacefully and for there son to grow a little. and during that time quin can train a little and he can train minny. as powerful as she is she could become so much more. maybe do it as a chapter that goes through a brief summary of the ten years with some highlights of family moments and then back into the action the next chapter

brian_watters
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I think this original is more inquisitive than the rest due to Quinns Shadow power which ties him to Arthur and also I think the fact he knows Jim wasn't around in their time he's a little distrustful of him.

Rimiru_Tempest_517
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Edvard.....hmm

Cindy_Lloyd
Cindy_LloydLv14Cindy_Lloyd

this is gettin' good!

Rimiru_Tempest_517
Rimiru_Tempest_517Lv14Rimiru_Tempest_517

I just hope Quinn can quell his desire for an adrenaline rush. He's been non-stop since he was 16 years old, except when he was forced to rest so he could evolve. Then when he woke up, he was off and running again! I just don't think he'll be completely happy being still, and with Layla's power, she'll know, just like she did the first night they were together. I don't believe he'll be completely with her ever.

lil_bill17
lil_bill17Lv15lil_bill17

Amazing Chapter

Alan_Davis_7237
Alan_Davis_7237Lv15Alan_Davis_7237

Love the “new guy /old guy

Kaifchocho
KaifchochoLv14Kaifchocho

Can't Quinn just show footage of his battles like what?? Quinn vs Graham Quinn vs Erin Quinn vs Immortui Demons Unless the mind control ability can somehow change recorded footage or have people not recognise Quinn or something then idk

ElPrincipeAustral
ElPrincipeAustralLv14ElPrincipeAustral

I was hoping that they would go to the Mermerial Queendom and life happily for a while before Quinn starts making different Vampire Races like his second Dedicated Follower predicted! A Mermerial Vampire Race, an Amra Vampire Race, bidding his time to strike against any and all who stand in his way!

DaoistiVON0F
DaoistiVON0FLv15DaoistiVON0F

Well at least things are starting to look up for them. Now maybe they can start to find out what happened to the others.

Steven_Soule
Steven_SouleLv14Steven_Soule

Looks like things are going in quinns favour just wish he would find out about his family history

Blackfut
BlackfutLv14Blackfut

Everyone deserves a Fortuna in their life.

Kaifchocho
KaifchochoLv14Kaifchocho

Bro is out here trying to live peacefully while the Blades been gettin massacred 😭😭

Hlf_Hogstar
Hlf_HogstarLv15Hlf_Hogstar

why is it seemingly weird to think Quinn is going to settle down like Vincent did but without losing his body, and where is Ray. we have quest to complete and Ray has answers.

Grant_Walker_0416
Grant_Walker_0416Lv14Grant_Walker_0416

It's nice to see that Edvard is willing to put what happened before behind him and I willi let Quinn just live a peaceful life with his family going forward, but I can't help feel like as soon as thing start to go well, something huge will happen and he'll have to step up and fight for everything he hold dear again.

Jesk8
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Haha. I think it might have went over Quinn’s head. Hikel meant the Fortuna Family. 😁

Twitch_theDude
Twitch_theDudeLv14Twitch_theDude

third

GG_Igor
GG_IgorLv3GG_Igor

This Original looks cool, although I imagine him facing Quinn in the future

Windcloud
WindcloudLv6Windcloud

Edvard is a good and kind original. He trusted his instinct and in future Quinn will reward him handsomely

Lord_Mothy
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