Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

There’s a quote that fits you vary well Author, it should be posted about you so everyone can see. “ good artists borrow, great artists steal” you have stolen our privilege chapters and push out content and shorten chapters and always have excusesas to why. You sir are a great artist I honestly would have felt better if you just took a month break and then posted what ever you had after or when you can get stable again instead of baiting us over and over. You have really transcended like our favorite mc Quinn into something different. You have turned into a great artist, truly one described by Pablo Picasso

Quinn torturing him but can't help but this may be hinting at his lost humanity. I don't think Quinn ever tortured anyone before. Finally he is using shadow eater again. Am surprised he didn't use the inspect skill on Jessica wasn't he in the habit of always using it. The system would have shown if she was a Dhampir or not.

This chapter went through all the limits!! We all knew Quinn had rage beyond any other vampire, Layla able to see emotions knew it... But this rage, Sith like... This torture filled chapter was beyond what I ever expected...

Quinn:

Well that was pretty brutal that guy is just destroyed

That was dark, pitch black dark. so far Quinn has managed to avoid the really dark and evil choices. and don't get me wrong I was totally expecting Derick to get his shadow eaten. What Quinn just did was way more than rage over a little girl getting her arms broken. It felt like a release of all Quinn's built up rage since waking up to a whole new world and being the man time forgot. Quinn being a father is like the old warning " You mess with my kid and I will be the last person you ever see before you have a talk with god." Quinn has just unlocked angry over protective father mode.

well good to see Quinn finally grow up and do something but still could have finished the episode with the part after the shadow eater. .. now we get another pseudo cliff hanger. ..

Brutal. I love it.

This is who you're going to become if you're not careful, Quinn

That was the ultimate punishment with a cherry on top lol

Boy do I miss 3 chapters a day but well done can’t wai for the next onet

Quinn is letting Hannah know that he is way more powerful than they could imagine.

when minny pointedd out derik. i laughed way to hard. frfr cried. like she standing there bold. swing her arms like they not broke. its not funny, but it was so funny.

I literally had to stop eating while reading this. I was like YES!!!! 🤔🤔🤔🤔 I think that makes me a very dark person. 👀

why the chapters always so short

can't tell if the chapter was short or if I just flew through it

This is my response to this chapter!