Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

It's chapter 69, we should celebrate it 🎉

Hmm Vorden seems happy with his new power lol

The are probably going to run into Quinn and a beast in someplace like the military building right

While I'm enjoying the story itself, I'm pretty sure that I will not be paying a single penny to read any further. Too many grammatical errors and incorrect words that sound like the word that's supposed to be there. Again, great story! But please, please, use a program like Grammarly; it will help immensely.

Still enjoying the story. Haven't quite got the full understanding of the app yet. Anybody mind helping with a couple likes? Thanks.

Good plot, still a little lost on why Vorden has three interacting personalities, but not a bad story.

he fell for it

how does mass release work? is that a mass release of free chapters? how often does this happen and how many chapters are released?

I'm liming lots of peoples comments just to help y'all keep geting stones to keep reading if y'all dont mind could inget a few likes as well pls

Its good

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I hope quinn gets back

can i get 2 likes Thanks in advance u a real one

LWMON

they should adapt this into a comic/manhwa

You have to love how Vorden can just take some ignorant person's ability to use. I definitely do...though I think that's one of the reasons he's so broken inside LOL

wait i'm confused who's vorden's third personality

I really like the visualisation of how each of personalities is able to control Vorden’s body. It’s an interesting explanation which other stories in the genre don’t describe really, e.g. Identity and Split.

New to the story but hooked. Good development over the chapter