I need more chapters. Still hooked.

Surely Vorden would have swapped out of the chair before the fight started?!

Best chapter yet!

Assume Erin will be turned now she has no abIlity

Have really enjoyed the last few chapters. While somethings have been quite obvious, there are enough twists and turns and surprises for the story not to become completely predIctable

Totally agree

More vampires coming

Not sure if just in his head or not from how it is written

This was a great chapter Moving the story forward

This chapter felt like a real change in tempo from what had been going on before, particularly when compared to events on the red portal planet. With short chapters and readers potentially only reading two or three at a time, these sudden shifts in pace can frel a bit strange Good however for setup over thr next few sections

Agree Its the thing that keeps me coming back

Explanation coming up

Absolutely agree

This is deveinitely improving overall

There is going to be some explaining to do by Quinn.

Really good chapters despite being mainly exposition

Evolution sounds interesting

Agree on chapter length The story is just keeping me interested enough not to give up at the moment but only just!!!

I’m still not clear of the exact nature of Vorden’s power but it makes it More interesting.

Really good change of pace. Introduction of the vampire cane a bit rarlier than I expected but has done it with a bang.