Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System
My Vampire System
JKSManga
Chapter comments190
Is this girl moron stalking people for no reason at all. For a military school she sure has a lot of time to waste
The chapters are so short that the story is starting to become boring, there simply isn't enough content in the chapter to make the reader engaged. If this goes on I'll probably end up dropping it since it just isn't fun to wait a whole day to get something half baked that shows barely any progression in the story.
Author, I shall continue with my (hopefully) helpful advice. Maybe the readers' perspectives help. If you are still working on perfecting your writing skills, then maybe go for quality over quantity of chapters. I haven't been using this app for long, so idk if you are writing this for fun or for money, or how payment would work, so if you are paid by upload then ignore me and get that money. If you do chose to update less frequently you could make the chapters longer, to better hold people's attention, but also be a little less wordy and repetitive with statements. For example, you stated that they just handed over the credits before and after a paragraph of details. If you have more time to edit, think about, and ponder your work, you would be giving a lot more quality. I know that this was written a while ago though, so you might be doing that already. Anyways, I love the story. I'm trying to be constructive, but the musician in me is being a picky perfectionist, lol
