Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System
My Vampire System
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What I don't understand, and others have said he before, is why so many people leave so many 'this is bad' style comments and don't elaborate, I mean, can you at least leave like, half a paragraph or something on how to improve? It gets on my nerves seeing so many negative comments without any half-decent advice on how to improve. Of course there are obviously people who do leave those kind of comments, but not many. . .
To all the people complaining about the reviews it's not that the story is horrible its that the author is making the same mistake that the majority of writers make. Using tired over used cliches and making the MC alot more stupid then he should be because of 'reasons'. For an orphan that pretty much raised himself for 6 years he seems to have zero common sense. Doesn't check the area before secret testing. Doesn't think a military facility might have cameras everywhere. Doesn't test his new system abilities. Yes the thought putting someone else's blood in my mouth is disgusting as hell but I'd try to do it ONLY because I need to know if I have vampire abilities because there are alot of negatives I REALLY need to think about if I do end up being a vampire and I need to know so I can prepare and plan so I'm not caught by surprise if those things become an issue. This thought process is just common sense especially if your life might be on the line.
The MC is indeed an idiot. That is not a criticism but a fact. Just like saying the grass if green when it is green. So I don't really understand why there are people out there who seem annoyed that people are calling out the MC's idiocy when they are merely pointing out a true fact. Just because the MC is an idiot doesn't mean the story is bad. In fact, I'm actually enjoying the story so far.
This chapter was utterly boring and idiotic. It has a ton of horrible and utterly overused clichés; stupid reasoning, impossible coincidences, appalling romantic beginnings and just overall horrible tropes! I seriously worry for the MC's intellect at this point! His dense and imbecilic brain would form a black hole if you're not careful! Why this story is so highly rated, I don't understand at this point. I like vampires, always have, but this is just an insult to the genre so far! Like, how far can you honestly go, before you have to question your own writing quality? Do you honestly, really, enjoy making such an idiotic MC, author? And then there's just the super convenient girl, who just so happened to be training at this exact time, who just so happened to have seen the MC's previous test, and who juuust so happens to peek at the MC's new test. You can only go so far with coincidences. As Ian Fleming said; Once is happenstance. Twice is coincidence. Three times is enemy action. I know authors have to connect their characters along their stories for character development, and plot progression, but is it really too much to ask for some clever writing? Why do so many authors feel the need to force plot points so often, when so many readers strongly object? Sigh, rant over. The character just seems imbecilic to me so far, and the forced plot points are annoying. 0.5/5 chapter.
