Comments of chapter undefined of Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Adui
Chapter comments35
Hey Adui, I've been a fan since the beginning and have contributed a lot to support your novels. I love reading your work and will always read your chapters first before the others. With that said, I have one criticism lately, and I feel like you have started repeating yourself a lot, even if it's worded differently. I understand the necessity sometimes, but the overuse of it shortens the chapters for us readers. Sometimes, we can read both released chapters but not progress very far at all because you're staring the same thing over and over. It's kind of like how I'm starting to sound.... don't hate me, forever a fan wanting moređđ
Hey Audi. Since you have been focusing more on the infinite reality I was thinking about how you could expand that part of the story more. You've been trying to empower the citizens physically but I don't think there is a lot of story that can come out of that, Noah is always going to be the strongest, so I came to the conclusion that the people have to focus on technology. There hasn't been much emphasis placed on technology since the world cloak back at the Atlantian world and those chapters were some of the best of this book. The chapters showed how the citizens of a society could impact the bigger picture even though they were weak with technology. I just think there is a need for the citizens of the infinite reality to impact the story this is just one way to do it.
