Comments of chapter undefined of Playing One Piece

for every retard there that is crying to leave the crew or that it is ike the orginal let me tell you THE AUTHOR DID SAY AFTER ENEL SHIT WILL PROGRESS SO STFU AND WAIT LIKE EVERY OTHER PERSON TY

Let him stay with the crew plz 🥺🥺🥺

stay with the crew

Honestly the way you've written your oc and how you write in general ive changed from wanting him to leave the straw hats to not minding if you stay with them. I'm enjoying this.

Auther listen, your story doesn't have anything origenal. Like you colud add something as a pet or a new crewmate. Or maybe the MC could be more proactive. He did not even do anything in this chapter. He was only a spectator. Like if MC would act smart ass or cocoky or funny... Than it would me more fun to read. Love the rest of the chapter but still you could improve. But this chapter was just plane. Don't get me wrong I do like this noval that's why I am giving you pointers. Don't tqke it the wrong way.

Stay on the crew of luffy autor-san 😍😍😍😍

Marcus should leave the crew

In my opinion it doesn't matter if he stays or leaves the crew, the key thing here is it should diverge from the original story at least enough to not make it a simple retelling with an extra crew member. Besides this the writing is nice so good job Author.

I actually think it would be a pretty interesting story if he stays with the crew because all of the plot of the One Piece word revolves around the straw hats and I'm liking the dynamic between the crew mates.

DON'T stay with crew after he has the fruit!! it limits him too much! have him start his own crew and be allies with the strawhats! he could defeat kaido and become a yonko

I hope he leaves the crew after Skypiea but you do you author

Even though the author said that he is only joining part of the journey with the crew, the way he is making the MC all goodies with the crew and the way he literally calls luffy 'Captain' makes it like he never will. And what is even purpose of creating a new crew when you get this close to ur "temporary" crew ? I don't see him doing something original the way this novel is going.There have been 20 chapters with considerable length but other then changing the small scenarios, he has done nothing.

Thanks for the chapter. Will Marcus lie become reality or... .

90% of this chapter is filler lmao

Thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍

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Can I suggest that MC don't defeat Crocodile if you think about it's weard.Luffy progress not good and Robin enspired of luffy's way getting crews you know talk no jutsu. Sorry of my English and grammar he he.