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Story is freaking amazing, like always. Love your work dude. Now make sure to give Luffy some challenges, he's kinda OP. He needs at least some challenge to grow stronger.
Imagine garp seeing this... lol he wpuld join in as well ❤️🩹
Hey, I know it's your story and all. But I had a thing to say. Don't take it the wrong way my friend, but like most media try to make all religious group seem backwards, and racist already no need to mix it with your story as well. There are racists and bigots among all groups. Rights and lefts. Liberals and Conservatives. But don't try to follow along the media narrative and potray one party as the bad guy. Just saying. You might favor one party over the other. But you have to know not all of us raise a rainbow flag when someone homless guy is sleeping out in my backyard. I would rather help the homeless guy. Again don't take it the wrong way. But when there are extremities in all groups. Rather then calling it religious groups its better to call them cults or extremities. I'm sorry if you feel offended, I just spoke what I thought. Great story by the way. Been following you since you started writing the Summoning system novel.
Wait are you from an alternate reality ? Cause as far as I know, 14 year old Obito got his bum beat my Minato. Lost an arm and ran away. And Minato teleported a tailed beast, didn't use sage mode and was basically running out of chakra at that point. Even summoning the huge frog. The Fox fingered him though... . But yeah we can debate all day, but people will have their own oppions. I knida like this Minato. Making him be able to use Senjutsu even. But it's just my opinion, and I respect yours.
Wait was the kid important
Huh, that does make sense. Obito does seem to be a bit paranoid about his new life.
Big brain play, confuse yourself first to confuse theigh enemy.
Why do I feel like it's a gym bro moment.
Honestly, it makes sense if you compared him to kid Itachi. Obito's talent is no less from that. So I agree with you on this one, my guy. Take my power stones.
Just don't make him too OP or too weak. Maybe Jonin level, cause he's teacher Kagami is a Kage level Shinobi. (And Obito does have a mind of adult)